WIP DUMP

[amber dawn firebaugh]

old sprites for an old pokemon game and friend and i were gonna make wish we still could

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a guy i draw all the time

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guy again.. and a gengar

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see nayone familiar in this? tada it's that guy again

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[Star]

Is this where we post criticism compliments or both?

Either way. Your pokemon sprites are very bravo.

But I have some suggestions to make your face sets look.. better.

The body on everything is too skeletal and unhealthy looking. And necks don't work that way. A lot of the necks are long and they look like Giraffes

Anyway. you have a unique style. Unlike what I've ever seen before. You have some good potential

 

[Mascarpone]

not a fan of the elongated necks. I tend to do that too but i always doctor them down in illustrator. Otherwise, pretty cool.

 

[SolstICE]

what is all the blue stuff on the unicorn?

the pokemon sprites look really nice

 

[amber dawn firebaugh]

@Star + Masc: The long neck in intentional : )

@Sol: the blue stuff is WIP flames lol

 

[Venetia]

holy crapll wdijkwdmmmw

Doesnt this remind anyone of sharksweetheart's stuff??? It reminds me of it!! (that's a compliment). It might just be the tiny/thin legs and feet though.

I'm digging this stuff, man. Your palettes are incredible (particularly the fridge--mixing blue with green with orange seamlessly! beautiful) and the shapes are interesting and unique.

In the face set of the blonde guy with the very long neck and razor teeth, I think his neck would look more stylish if it were curved a little more dynamically. Right now his head kinda looks like a knob at the end of a pogo stick. I'm not saying shorten it, I can see what you're going for, it just feels like it's too toothpick-straight to fit in with the dynamics of the rest.

 

[amber dawn firebaugh]

Wow Ven.. i completely agree. WOW lol ! i never noticed that until you pointed it out. I'm gonna go fix that now, heh.

 

[DJ]

aye, your art looks fine, but They are all little bit weird.

First, neck is tooooooo long. Try to make them little shorter.
and they have..strage contrast. you should fix them.
another shapes ...is fine.

I luv this one but that horse which have flame on its tail (dunno much about that character) is weird because its tail and fur is too pixelerated

His legs are thin. make it thicker

The first one is OKay, but second one have weird clothing
(is it not done yet? it looks like you're not done on it yet...)

OK anyway this thing is fine
Keep it up and improve Lol

 

[amber dawn firebaugh]

NONE of them are done haha thats what WIP stands for-- Work In Progress

the long necks and skinnyness are intentional