[WIP] Dragonwarrior

[Blo0dY]

Hi,
im working on a rtp sprite, for a mystik dragonwarrior.
Here are the first 3 Frames of the sheet and i need some feedback, what do you think about it?

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6403 ... gerlc2.png[/img]

 

[Kiniko]

Eww, the template looks horribly resized. And because all of your shades are so close together, you can barely see your shading.

 

[ArcanaMagek]

It's not that bad just wait till it's finished okay?

 

[Esper]

2-Language

Ok.. The legs are to small.. And the head... THE HEAD... The Head won´t work with the Body... Please.. work on this much more...

Also, die Beine sind zu kurz ( im Vergleich zum Körper ). Der Kopf passt stilmäßig mal garnich zum Rest. Du solltest da noch viel Arbeit reinstecken.....

 

[Prince_of_thieves]

i think it could be betr whithout the tail

 

[Verzen]

2-Language

Ok.. The legs are to small.. And the head... THE HEAD... The Head won´t work with the Body... Please.. work on this much more...

The legs arnt too small. Look closely, its a "loincloth" type thing that is covering half of each leg giving it the illusion that it looks smaller.

 

[brainstorm]

illusion makes you sound like a nerd >_> <_< no offense.

The Bluess look to close together. It's not very attractive.