Wild Rage Origin

[lusianl]

Lusianl

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WILD RAGE ORIGIN


Hi to all I am Lusianl and this is my project, I apologize me for my English, but I use translators..
Plot

The Goddess Angelasasi is waked up again, and its principal intent is to bring pain and death anywhere trying to wake up again the hate in the mind of the living beings and breaking the equilibrium of the world...It will touch to Wild, Shyla, Viku, Galis and Paidor to prevent that the goddess reaches his/her biechis you sweep, and among thousand adventures, great battles, will discover that perhaps you/he/she is not the Goddess the greatest danger..
Characters
Wild

Wild is the incarnation of the spirit of the wolf, endowed with a strength and of an extraordinary power, of good character and an insane pò, it always looks for the clash to improve him but inside of if the spirit of the wolf interests for instigating its fury

Game player
AMS(advance movement system)
Xas hero 3.1
Item Shop
Item system
Quest System
Bestiary
UMS(ultimate message system)
Script gioco tasti

Screenschot
Map system:

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Title

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Game

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Fan art

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Credits
Mikb89,Moghunter,Rune,El Conducter,Zeus81

 

[zchin]

Overall story line
The artwork is very nice and you mapping is a little plain, but it's still good, the plot line of the game is vague to me, who is this goddess person really? What is her past like? Try making a legend or something like that. Why is this Angelasasi person trying to do what she is doing?

Characters
Wolf, I think that he isn't very interesting or likable to me, if he is a reincarnation of a wolf then why does that set him apart from other human beings, I personally don't like just one character in the storyline unless it's a plague thing, thats an exception, if there are more characters then you shouldn't post this just yet, but of there aren't any other main character, I don't really like that at all.

Screenshots
The first screenshot I can understand but very, very, vaguely. I think you should add captions to what is happening tell the readers that the first screenshot is a travel map, and how it is organized. the second screenshot is of the menu right? Why does the options say "Tutorial" "Intro" "Gioco" I think you should stick to the standard menu. In the last screenshot I can tell your using icons that is made by someone not in your credits list. Other then that I can't really see anything else wrong.

Art
I think that wolf looks like goku from dragon ball z, is that your inspirational source? The art isn't that good, but isn't that bad either, it rounds to good though. Also I think you should get a logo or something.

I think that you should continue on this project, it has a lot of potential.

Thank you and have a wonderful like day!

 

[lusianl]

Thanks for the comments.I apologize, a lot of things I don't understand her, I try better to answer as I am able...
The plot I prefer to make her/it live on the game rather than read on the forum...
Have not I understood well, Wild you don't like the protagonist?
The screens are all images of action, pultroppos are static and don't be understood well.The icon I have found her on a file image without author, if you know him/it and you point out me him I will insert him/it among the credits...
You, I recall me in the style Toriyama, but I still have a lot of road to do.
I make you see the new viku

Viku is spiteful, blunderer and disrespectful.The only ones that he/she doesn't take around are Wild that considers his/her brother and Imagia his/her adoptive father.
Viku has the power to become round and rubbery and during the adventure Wild a lot of times it will use him/it as ball against the enemies.

 

[lusianl]

A small novelty, the blog of Wild rage with plot, conceptual map and fan art, is on my signature. :biggrin:

 

[lusianl]

Evvai!
Have finished the whole prologue with the temple of Imagia (Inside-external) with a change of charset, now I use the my beloved charas of the vx!
They are at work for the laboratory of E'ugen and the games of the Bibi-sisters...

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I have also adjourned the blog with the histories of Angelasasi and E'ugen.
Have finally taken the street correct boys!

 

[zchin]

The screenshot looks very nice! Looks very custom, and I thought that this game was in rmxp not rmvx? Overall the things still look as good as before.

Thank you and have a nice day!

 

[lusianl]

Boys, have decided then to make a graphic updating to Wild rage to personalize him/it even more.
Naturally the updating will include also the images...
For now:
The new style of the charsets, with new template:

Then also the elements as this tree:

Ricolorato, an a little modified and with the foliage's addition modified by me.
And this fence served as zero:

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[lusianl]

Here here other updatings:
La nuova grafica di Wild Rage è cosi:

Does thing seem of it?
And this is the image of the menù of the games of the bibi-sisters

 

[Twirly]

Those big rocks clash with the other tiles.

 

[MCsephiroth13]

Graphics are lookin' great.