what i'm creating!

[crazymew]

i'm turning this template dude (vex template i think it is) into a demon! tell me yer thoughts please! C&c always welcome... NO flaming or spamming please!

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... demonn.png[/IMG]
and with the lighter backround...
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... monnnn.png[/IMG]

question is... should i continue making him a demon? or will noone use it and i should stop now? (yes, yes, i know its just a recolour... but i thought it was a kool semi-usefull thing to do...)

edit: first row... should i continue?...(or change anything? move the horns? please tell me if there's anything wrong...)
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... noname.png[/IMG]

 

[Tdata]

Could you go wil a lighter background? I can't really tell with the background on it.

 

[crazymew]

there... changed it to green... now its easier to see eh? (better than the light blue i put on it a lil bit ago...)

edit: COMPLETED!!!!
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... demon1.png[/IMG]
(i wouldve had it done sooner if i wasnt waiting fer replies and critique... anywho... im still open fer C&c...)

 

[Nuaik]

Well, the horns are tiny at best.. Its mostly a recolour so there isnt much to comment on I think anyone using a template for a game must be able to atleast sprite a little and think that they could have done this on there own. :S. Nice try I suppose just try something a little more difficult next time. ^_^

 

[Diddle]

if you want to make him like a super bad ass devil, you could add some tatoos, larger horns, a tail, and maybe some wings. Right now he looks like a red guy with 2 marks on his forhead. They don't really look like horns in my opinion.

 

[crazymew]

yes... i just wanted to turn a template into a demon template, i didnt actually make a charset... but thanks fer the comments, and i will try something more difficult next time...

 

[eternal_magus]

The horns on the sideviews are the wrong way around, if they're supposed to be curving horns, which it looks like they are. Apart from that, it's good!

 

[crazymew]

hmm... good point...

 

[ryanwh]

add a tail/larger horns/sharper hands/bigger eyes.

 

[crazymew]

i might later, right now im a bit busy... but i'll keep these in mind...

 

[Ronnoc3]

I might make an atempt at adding better horns

 

[crazymew]

go right ahead, i'd like to see that, it'll look better!

 

[Colormagix]

come on crazymew you have some real spriting ability you could make this alot better. I could expect a never before spriter doing this. you could really spruce this up. "I see your just being a Lazymew arent you? you want other people to do the work... i see it now" but yea seriously use your "A" Game

 

[crazymew]

er... a "lazymew"?... maybe... *looks around mischeviously*... i'm in the process of making something else at the moment tho... i might not be able to get back to this fer a lil while... but i'll spruce it up more once i have time,

 

[crazymew]

ok... i'm back from my little "vacation" and now im gonna screw around with my demon to make him look better...

edit: this is him... slightly longer and curved horns and a tail...
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... emon03.png[/IMG]
for all i know its finished now... but i'm still open fer suggestions...

 

[SporksAreMyFriends]

The back view head looks pillow shaded. Also, you don't seem to have any highlights. And, I think the horns should be longer and blended more with the head.

Lastly, the idle frame's tail should be hanging strait down. Otherwise he would be standing still with his tail in suspended animation.

 

[Rye]

Sporks, I think the reason the head is shaded like that was because that's how Val originally made the template. He's just editing it.

 

[SporksAreMyFriends]

Oh, that makes since looking back at it. Sorry.

 

[crazymew]

idle animation? i can see the blending his horns in to look better... but with the tail?... i dunno... i'll see what i can do...

edit:... changed the tail a bit in one of the idle animations and blended the horns a bit more...
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/c ... emon04.png[/IMG]

 

[Angelicremorse]

Good, not exactly my style, but i like the actual artwork itself.