Well...Recent Arts and Graphics

[DJ]

I once told that i was coming back to HBGAMES about two months ago, but somehow my schedules have
changed and forgot all about it. But now i got some time about 2 weeks, So during that period
I'll try my best to maintain online.

I wasn't be able to color them with graphic tools since my tablet is no longer available on my computer.
(I should start practicing how to draw with only mouse.)

Anyway, This is the recent arts that I drawed with mechanical pencils. (0.5 mm HB leads)
Give some comments and crits. I still should get a load of advice so i could improve. :biggrin:

Maybe I also should practice more anatomy rather than just drawing without thinking. :
And Sorry that I don't have much things to show you, cause I don't really feel like drawing these days.

Spoiler: Marauder from StarCraft2

Spoiler: FleshPound from Killing Fllor

Spoiler: Have some boobies, lads!

The Old Jessica.

New Jessica. That's her main weapon she's holding.
My current RMXP project's Heroine.
Name : Jessica N. Smith
Age : 16
Body : 175 cm / 62 Kg
Race : Cat Woman
Personality : She acts like cute girl in front of her lover, But is very violent and mad when she kills the enemy.
Weapon : Quadron Buster ( Rocket Launcher, which can load 4 rockets. )

BOONUS :

Spoiler: WARNING :: Mature Content.....(I DONT GIVE A SHIT)

MISTERRR HERO YOU WERE A GAYYYYYY <one of my old arts>

Now there you go with graphics that I made. Most of them are made with photoshop.
And I warn you : DO NOT USE ANY OF THESE GRAPHICS, OR I'LL DAMN YOU TO HELL.

Spoiler: LOL.

My Current Game Title. <Beta Test Starts around this month.>

Spoiler: Loads of Icon I made

A High Explosive Grenade Icon.

I dunno what it is called.....But German Grenade anyawy..

Several Healing Skill Icons.

Cheap Magical Skill icon.

Poison Spores Skill Icon.

A Minigun!

12 Gauge Buckshot.

Spoiler: Custom Made HUD in action.

Custom Made HUD in action. Script and Graphic all by me!

 

[Alypt]

I really like your logo design. The wing-like design is quite beautiful. Although I think the text itself blends far too well with them to the point it blends in and becomes unreadable. I think it will look better if you got rid of the filters on the text to something much more readable. As they say, less is more.

 

[DJ]

I really like your logo design. The wing-like design is quite beautiful. Although I think the text itself blends far too well with them to the point it blends in and becomes unreadable. I think it will look better if you got rid of the filters on the text to something much more readable. As they say, less is more.

I'll try my best. Maybe it's because i like to make text with mass amount of effects.
But I should think how to save both 'readability' and 'beauty'.

 

[moxie]

It looks nice but it is a bit busy. Simplicity is key for a good logo and titlescreen. Look at some of the most memorable video game logos - most of them feature simple text and unique, appealing designs that aren't too distracting.

Also this may be a bit nitpicky but it's always best when the designs are representative of the game itself. For example - does the wings motif on your logo have a link to anything in the game itself? How about the space background?

 

[DJ]

It looks nice but it is a bit busy. Simplicity is key for a good logo and titlescreen. Look at some of the most memorable video game logos - most of them feature simple text and unique, appealing designs that aren't too distracting.

Also this may be a bit nitpicky but it's always best when the designs are representative of the game itself. For example - does the wings motif on your logo have a link to anything in the game itself? How about the space background?

Well, This may sound little bit wrong...
The Wings represent 'Angel', Which is very important characters affects the game's background story.
And the space, if you look at the right side, You can see Earth. Well...... I put this thing because
My game is about the wars and invasion on earth..

To understand more easily, I would rather write my game's prologue..
<LOL, I spend some time to translate it into English. And I'm not perfect at english ---...>

Spoiler: Metal Fable :: The Hidden Power - Prologue

A.D 2580 , Earth.

Humans now just got rid of outdated technology, which is called 'Science Technology'...
And They discovered 'Magic', Which is just known in legend and thought to be mysterious.

'Sharing energy with the nature.' was the basics of Magic,
And that was like a rain in draught for humans since they were suffering from lack of resource
and pollution.

The century that worries of finding resource is gone.
Humans now can earn what they want, So conflicts between countries have decreased a lot,
And peace came to the world.

But not so long after, disaster is started.

One of another species on earth 'Devils', which is hated by humans because they believed all the devils
were evil and bad, and underestimated them.

And now, Evils open an assault to human world.

Humans have no idea what to do since they lived in peace and abundance,
So they got beated by those invaders.

Several countries become allies, and reformed army to begin war with invaders.
Mass amount of soldiers fight several times with devils.

But devils were outlawing humans in number, and power.
So humans lost every time they fights back.

When humans realize there's no more benefit by fighting,
they fell in depression and emperors claimed surrender.

Humans started call that day 'The Eradication Day'.

After that day, billions of humans were slaughtered.
survivors continued resisting, but they wasn't be able to push devils out.

50 years after the Eradication day, humans almost extincted.

In that period, One person was watching the whole thing. It was Angels.

They rule the whole world, and they're considered as gods.
And this mass-murder wasn't be able to tolerated by them.

So they decided to end this bloodbath.

After a moment, Seraphim lead the angels to the earth and destroyed all the devils,
and resurrected humans. The war is over.

And another 50 years passed.

after that story, hero's story begins. but i'm not going to write that now.

And hey, no comments for drawings you too?

 

[DJ]

LOL. New art. I drew jessica again, with changed poses and weapon.
C & C wanted!

 

[mouse_std]

awesome title
awesome icon
awesome hud wep and skill , the hp/mp might need a fix since it clouded the bar and cant seem to see it(or its just me :D )
awesome scetch, i like the robot, the first cat girl her left hand touching her pants seems off it should be deeper like shes resting her hand on her pants and maybe pull the pants down a little bit :D , the 2nd cat girl..umm...somethings seems off about her right arm dont know what though,
to me if talk reality , with her slender body, position(of standing up rather than kneeling) and hand position, she would have been knocked of when firing or miss the target completely. awesome scetch anyway :thumb:

 

[Daxis]

well er
the text is definitely hard to read, as it has been stated, but the design is pretty neat itself.
The other designs are quite nice. Jessica version 2 seems to be a bit less strange compared to the first- the first had a look that was sorta off. also, jessica version two should not be wearing high heeled shoes and firing a bazooka. That's just... not gonna end well.

 

[DJ]

well er
the text is definitely hard to read, as it has been stated, but the design is pretty neat itself.
The other designs are quite nice. Jessica version 2 seems to be a bit less strange compared to the first- the first had a look that was sorta off. also, jessica version two should not be wearing high heeled shoes and firing a bazooka. That's just... not gonna end well.

awesome title
awesome icon
awesome hud wep and skill , the hp/mp might need a fix since it clouded the bar and cant seem to see it(or its just me :D )
awesome scetch, i like the robot, the first cat girl her left hand touching her pants seems off it should be deeper like shes resting her hand on her pants and maybe pull the pants down a little bit :D , the 2nd cat girl..umm...somethings seems off about her right arm dont know what though,
to me if talk reality , with her slender body, position(of standing up rather than kneeling) and hand position, she would have been knocked of when firing or miss the target completely. awesome scetch anyway :thumb:

In reality, yes. but don't you think she's just totally different
just from holding quad bazookas?

actually i was planning to equip her with 300-round Miniguns,
but making minigun in RMXP is almost impossible,
(even if it is possible, it is laggy and buggy like hell)
So i changed it to bazooka.

Well, i made her characteristics - to be very unreal.

First, as you see, she can handle that big ass bazooka very well.
Yes, she got some strength. she also can carry something more heavier than that.

Second, she is stubborn as roach and recovers fast. She can survive from C4 explosion, She can survive headshots, and just shooting normal gun to her won't really hurt her.

And one more special thing. You guys see that bandage in her left arm?
That's the sealing bandage for her 'Curse', which makes her strong like hell, but takes her mind off - which turns her into a frantic killer.

But that 'Curse' little bit don't fit her, so i might remove that 'Curse'.

Anyway, thnx for some comments

 

[mouse_std]

well er
the text is definitely hard to read, as it has been stated, but the design is pretty neat itself.
The other designs are quite nice. Jessica version 2 seems to be a bit less strange compared to the first- the first had a look that was sorta off. also, jessica version two should not be wearing high heeled shoes and firing a bazooka. That's just... not gonna end well.

really? the first cat girl might have a strange sword stuck in her back leg, bumpy head,stiff leg,stiff hand(pants) but i think it has more character than the 2nd one , i like the 1st more than 2nd but it might just be me.

First, as you see, she can handle that big ass bazooka very well.
Yes, she got some strength. she also can carry something more heavier than that.

Second, she is stubborn as roach and recovers fast. She can survive from C4 explosion, She can survive headshots, and just shooting normal gun to her won't really hurt her..

wow that changes things. shes like that girl robot in some anime i forgot what XD
in my mind when i look at her, i thought she was more of an agile type (looking at her clothes + sword), smart &confidence& cheerfull (not gloomy/killer expression)
not a tank XD

 

[DJ]

well er
the text is definitely hard to read, as it has been stated, but the design is pretty neat itself.
The other designs are quite nice. Jessica version 2 seems to be a bit less strange compared to the first- the first had a look that was sorta off. also, jessica version two should not be wearing high heeled shoes and firing a bazooka. That's just... not gonna end well.

really? the first cat girl might have a strange sword stuck in her back leg, bumpy head,stiff leg,stiff hand(pants) but i think it has more character than the 2nd one , i like the 1st more than 2nd but it might just be me.

First, as you see, she can handle that big ass bazooka very well.
Yes, she got some strength. she also can carry something more heavier than that.

Second, she is stubborn as roach and recovers fast. She can survive from C4 explosion, She can survive headshots, and just shooting normal gun to her won't really hurt her..

wow that changes things. shes like that girl robot in some anime i forgot what XD
in my mind when i look at her, i thought she was more of an agile type (looking at her clothes + sword), smart &confidence& cheerfull (not gloomy/killer expression)
not a tank XD

LOL - Tank. that made me laugh a little.
Well, the reaso that i made her into such a monster is that i don't really like game heroines which is too weak that they cannot protect themselves, So I made her to be amazingly strong girl.

And also i like strong & glamorous image more than a just 'innocent' girl.
(Of course, I mean in drawing character. It doesn't really mean that i like that kind of girl in the real life.)