[VX] My Project Magivolve

[keyeske]

Hello everyone this is a project im workin on im not truly even started yet basically im testing out my images in rpg maker and working on my system
thanks for all the good scripts that are provided heres the link

Storyline
Heres a simple verison of the story
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In the world of pershephone Technology is the way of life for humans and various other races to live a simpler life. they let machines do all the work for them, with their beastly machines the races began to rule the planet this also enabled them to be at the top of the food chain killing off many living things at such a rapid rate the animals started to repoduce alot slower, with all the countless chemicals spreading through out the planet natures natural recycling system slowed dramatically. Heaven inc the religious leaders of the world began to take notice of the planets decline and the decide to restore the worlds recycling rate so they created a system called Magic and what this system would do is use machines to force pershephone the life force out of pershephone to speed up the process of the planets recycling system, people just couldnt live without their machines so instead of people shutting down machines they force more stress on the planet the races would lead to killing themselve and the planet.

The story starts with a boy named keyeske and a girl named chikara they both do heavy reaserch on the planet so they are well aware of the events that are happening they one day find a journal in a old beaten up house of a person claming to know how to restore the planet without the use of machines but the needed to meet this person in a certin location to find out. curious the two followed the instructions they then find the unknown character who then who then teleports the to a relm of nonthin but black space with a glowing light in the middle The man and a woman stood in the distance this woman claimed to be the soul of the planet and the unknown man was her messenger
she told them that the world is at a point that if the races dont stop harming the planet that the planet will become like the surrounding planets, she then told them they werent choosen by her nore the unknown guy they just followed the bait they set she then told them that they are to accept the power she is giving them human would refer to this power as natural magic she then said there were two others before them that accepted this magic and they are the last two she told them that this is the last chance she is giving humans to redeem them selves the four can either use the natural magic to find a way to change the world or cause ferther destruction but either way as harsh as it sounds she only gave them three months to do so and if nonthin changes she will then destroy all of the races herself and ofcourse for her to do that she would have to cause global disasters to eliminate the billions of humans and after time nature would return to its normal cycle. the two were very understanding about this situation and vowed to change the world in three months even thou it seemed impossible they were very determined.


http://keyeske.com/Magivolve.exe

this has all sorts of glitches in it typos and all but it all will be fixed soon i will release part one in a week or so

heres some screens

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[rikuken]

That actually looks pretty cool and worth playing.

 

[moog]

Im new here, but I think if you truly arent started on it yet maybe you shouldnt post quite yet? *scratches head*
But other than that, the screens look great! ^_^

Try to post your stuff here instead of a link though.
Edit: Nevermind, thats an .exe *slaps self*
Good luck!

 

[Mazoku]

That art is really good. You did that yourself? Very professional looking! Good job.
(Are those monsters turkeys painted colors with eyeballs? Sick!)

Kind of early to judge, but it looks like it's coming along nicely. Good luck I hope you complete this. The art is pretty sweet and we need more VX projects.

 

[Grathea]

I hate to do this to you, but you're going to have to fix up your project topic before the mods get here.
Here's the forum guidelines.

EDIT: Oh, you posted some screens. The rest of the rules still need attention, though.

 

[Ratty524]

What gratheo said.

This looks pretty good. I would recommend resizing those faces so that they aren't so large, but that's just me.

 

[keyeske]

story added dont mind all the spelling mistakes im gettin my wife to fix them soon

 

[Diedrupo]

That was a pretty weird demo. Yeah, it basically had nothing in it. Felt more like a tech demo than anything else.

You seem to be pretty early on. My only suggestion is to make the faces smaller.

 

[Magicant]

With the planet being destroyed and people going to stop it, I have to ask some questions. Are the people who want to save the planet going to start an underground movement, known as Avalanche? Is their goal in the game to shut down these machines known as Mako Reactors? Is the purpose of these reactors to drain the planet of its life?

In my experience with planetary pollution etc, I find that the easiest cure is to find yourself some black sphere thing, and call a giant meteor down to smash the planet and kill everything.

Also, in one of the screenshots, the one with the girl complaining, it looks like the guy has voices in his head due to the fact no one is with him.

 

[keyeske]

With the planet being destroyed and people going to stop it, I have to ask some questions. Are the people who want to save the planet going to start an underground movement, known as Avalanche? Is their goal in the game to shut down these machines known as Mako Reactors? Is the purpose of these reactors to drain the planet of its life?

In my experience with planetary pollution etc, I find that the easiest cure is to find yourself some black sphere thing, and call a giant meteor down to smash the planet and kill everything.

Also, in one of the screenshots, the one with the girl complaining, it looks like the guy has voices in his head due to the fact no one is with him.

ill answer your questions
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With the planet being destroyed and people going to stop it, I have to ask some questions. Are the people who want to save the planet going to start an underground movement, known as Avalanche? Is their goal in the game to shut down these machines known as Mako Reactors? Is the purpose of these reactors to drain the planet of its life?
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Actually in final fatasy 7 the machines are powerd by the life of the planet the mako energy, in my story machines are ran by the resorces of the planet such as oil, steam and other resorces that we have learned to turn into energy. as for the machines they force the life out of the planet to use it to speed up the recycling process of the earth because we use the resorces up so fast. The problem with the machines is that they only can cover so much area per machine this creates an unbalence since other areas get less life energy, so yes the machines do take life from the planet but they are trying to control the planets enviorment by using its life force of the planet and this unbalences the world. The world gets fed of with people and gives them three months to clean up their act or it will kill of most of the people of the world destroy all of the machines and start its natural cleaning process

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In my experience with planetary pollution etc, I find that the easiest cure is to find yourself some black sphere thing, and call a giant meteor down to smash the planet and kill everything.
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in responce to that the planet will not create world wide destruction it will only kill humans by beaking them down into atoms only alowing few to servive. to the planet doing this is part of its cleaning cycle because mater can neither be destroyed nor created the atoms of the humans will be used and created into various other things. but to avoid this from happening all humans have to do is change their life style

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Also, in one of the screenshots, the one with the girl complaining, it looks like the guy has voices in his head due to the fact no one is with him.
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i tried to use the cantapillar system so the characters follow each other but it wouldnt work right for me

 

[keyeske]

Also did you try the game out? well the little that ive done

 

[Magicant]

Fair enough.

And no, I haven't tried it yet. I'll go ahead and try it out sometime later today/tomorrow and leave a review.

*Edit*

Well, I tried to downlaod it, but the link was broken.

 

[keyeske]

Sorry about that the link is fixed

 

[Magicant]

Well... I played the 'demo'. I'm honestly not sure why you posted it in its current state. I start in a city with no direction, though it wasn't to hard to find a place to go, since none of the buildings are operational aside form like.. 1. I got some Jumping Boots I couldn't use for whatever reason. I tried to equip them, I couldn't, I tried hitting a lot of different keys on the keyboard, nothing happened. So I gave up, went downstairs where I found a Journal, and a lot of text I eventually skipped through. I then wen't off to talk to some guy in town, who teleported me to a fire-pit (After I had to reply with "Hells ya" for a response) with some monsters who beat the living shit out of me.

Things I did like, some music, custom faces, the "Level Up" system. Things I didn't like, pretty much everything else. And a side note with the typos. Some of them may have been intentional, I'm not really sure, but ones I know probably weren't are things like the Iraq and such as...(South Carolina anyone?) But seriously you spelled I've as "Ive" etc. Maybe this should be moved to the "Early Projects" section, because there really isn't much going on here from what I can tell. Demo grade 2.5/10

*Edit, after looking at the game in the VX editor, I see the reason I couldn't jump is because only 1 of the jumpable looking spots in the room actually allow it.