VX - HK WIP. [UPDATED]

[WeaponOD]

This is a WIP for a project I'm working on. I know there isn't enough shades...but I tried to mimic the VX characterset exactly.

C&C please.

http://i34.tinypic.com/k2xzcn.png[/IMGzoom]

 

[coyotecraft]

A nice start. The hair looks great, her pigtail looks a little strange at the bottom thou.

• The bra looks pillowshaded with the lighter shades in the center like that.
• The skirt could use some dithering.
• Draw some fingers on the glove.

Edit: Don't forget to shade the forehead too.

 

[WeaponOD]

Oh no, I feel bad now....too many things I should of done from the start... I'll try n fix those things.

 

[bojjenclon]

Nice bro, I like it, I like. The only thing I have to say is this:
Right now she got like double A's, (if thats even real). Do as Soulja Boi said, "Throw some D's on that bit!"

 

[fikan]

It looks good, but there is some kind of aura around the newer one. That's the only thing I see, great job :thumb:

 

[coyotecraft]

Feels like there should be a shadow on the legs from the skirt. Unless it's one of those skin tight skirts.
Good luck with the rest of the frames, it's looking good.

 

[meian]

Nice bro, I like it, I like. The only thing I have to say is this:
Right now she got like double A's, (if thats even real). Do as Soulja Boi said, "Throw some D's on that bit!"

Guys: or  :scream: ?

Anyhow, OP this looks really cute. The only thing that gets me is the bottom hem of the skirt. It looks kind of ... balloony? Like, it hangs like a regular skirt, but then there's tight elastic at the bottom to cinch it close to the legs. I dunno. I'd make it come off just a teensy bit, maybe like a pixel or two, off the legs, even if it is supposed to be skintight.

 

[WeaponOD]

I know what you mean, just I don't agree... But your allowed to your own opinion. Anyways, I've fixed the sprite and Ill add more frames shortly.

 

[bojjenclon]

Nice man, its coming along. The animations look fine, and you already have my issue.

 

[WeaponOD]

Updated.

 

[coyotecraft]

I imagined that strand of hair on the side-view to be further up on her face, so that it's not covering her ear so much.

You went a little to heavy on the dithering of the boot. You see very little of the skirt in that side frame; once you add in the belt piece it'll be even less to see. It looks like you tried dithering the skirt but since it so small it hurts it, you could smooth out the bumps in the shading.

I noticed you thickened her thigh in the 3rd front-view frame to fit the skirt more. Don't forget to do that to the rest of the frames.

 

[Showkaizer]

Its definitely one of the better HK attempts. But dude. ease up and the dithering. It makes the sprite look messy and in such a small sprite it REALLY isn't necessary.