vegeta?

[shinasura]

Okay this is my first attempt at this but feel free to fire an ideas at me.

Okay i altered it a lil bit,changed the eyes to make him look more serious and darkened the armour/hair.Improvement or no?(left the original for comparison)

 

[Sqauner]

Looks good for a first one but I would change the eyes (it's to green) and add some shadows.

 

[Anonymous]

Not a bad start at all. However, your palette is very unsaturated, that makes it too bright. I don't recoment using pure greys/whites/blacks on sprites, since they tend to look flat. Also, the hair could use a highlight.

The parts of the shading that are yours are pretty good (most of it seems to be recolored template, but it's only obvious on the boots). You've done a good job with the hair at just suggesting shape - too many people try to sprite every little detail at first. Kudos. ^_^

I'd check out Tana's tutorial, it has a section on both palettes and hair that are very, very good.

 

[shinasura]

just giving this a bump so you can tell ive done something to it.See original post

 

[Rain]

It looks flat, and the colour pallette is to bright, but for a first attempt it rocks.

Keep it up, because Spriting is hard

 

[shinasura]

It looks flat, and the colour pallette is to bright, but for a first attempt it rocks.

Keep it up, because Spriting is hard

i agree it looks flat but given its an anime character the graphics are meant to look reasonably bright and cartoony.Piccy of the character
http://repos.insttech.washington.edu/~hwang24/tcss460/images/Vegeta.png

Ill see what more i can do to him

 

[NexS]

the green makes me cry.... hes looking strangly "up".. but good so far

 

[shinasura]

the green makes me cry.... hes looking strangly "up".. but good so far

noticed the up looking thing, ill fix that.

Amusing ninja pic btw but mine is better =)
http://www.myspace.com/johnlawrie me ninja gear