Uplifting high-spirited theme with a dash of sorrow

[nazra7]

Hey everyone. I'm still making music. (or trying lol)
I made this song, it could be used for a hero or event them or a title theme. Please comment^^
link:
http://www.box.net/shared/3rukc7jh9s

 

[LooseEnds]

I love the melody. Very chill and uplifting.

I don't however like your synths. Their very weirdly pitched.
Also it seemed liked the the tempo was going to pick up, but it never did. Not a bad thing really but it kept me waiting to hear a drum roll and it get faster.

 

[nazra7]

getting the right pitch is really hard for me...

 

[Gulch666]

the cymbals need to be toned town, and well, get new sounds for them.

also some of the notes sound out of key. in the middle-ish part of the song, the rhythm instrument, when it hits the higher note, that note. it sounds off