trying to find my style again...

[fallen_angel]

well forget the other post, but this one is way better, i stopped doing images and stuff for the site.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b34/F ... qwrqeq.jpg[/IMG]

please tell me what you think of this.
i might be for a game i am making, ill never tell :lol:

as always,
fallen

 

[The Stranger]

very good

 

[Lashiec]

The M on kingdom is hard to read, maybe make it lighter like the rest of the letters. Also, Lost Chapters is really hard to read also.

 

[Danny]

I don't think your style ever went away. "Lost Chapters" could be a little clearer.

 

[fallen_angel]

thanks everybody. actually suprisingly i couldn't do that when i tried yesterday the first time. but after that it was smooth sailing. I am going to make lost chapters a little bit clearer i didn't realize it was that hard to read until i actually posted it.

thanks everybody =]