Trigger Template revised(Previously Template 1000)

[Musashi]

I've started working on my old template (that I'm using for my game) again. Heres the newer version:

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g182/ ... mplate.jpg[/IMG]

 

[Despain]

Surprisingly good. I was expecting total trash.

There's no reason that the woman's feet shouldn't be as wide as the man's. She looks like she's having a hard time keeping her balance with those little things.

They both look VERY hunched. If you're able to tilt the rest of the body to keep the perspective, it'd work out. But hell, I have a hard time with that perspective myself--it might be easier to unhunch them a little.

I like the big forearms on the original male (though I'm glad you fixed the Saiyan Armor shoulders). I think it makes a cool style.

 

[RavenTDA]

Yeah fix that hunched look. It's much better but they resemble apes almost now. Try giving them a neck area.

 

[WalkingAbomination]

I think all you need to do is raise the head 1 pixel, that should fix that.

Here we go, a pixel change can make a big difference sometimes, hope you dont mind man.
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u132/InvisibleDrifter/Headup1pixel-.png

 

[Ninjitsu]

Wow. Looks good.
But how do they interact with the RTP tilesets?

 

[Venetia]

It looks to me like it'd fit with RTP but every accessory object would look gigantic.

Anyway I don't like hard black outlines on sprites, but aside from what others have said, I have little to contribute to the critique ;')