Title screenage

[Cerus]

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/6945/titlenl0.jpg[/img]

Thoughts and feedback would be appreciated.

 

[WeaponOD]

Just brushes?.... a bit bland for a ps user, but it looks nice anyways, maybe add a bit more light to it, maybe put a Lens flare in the background, behind the text, or even use the dodge tool around the highlights of the circles around the text. Oh and add like a slight gradient so it goes to a darker shade of blue or something, IMO it'll look better, but yeah.

Oh and add a little black stroke border.

I hope you did it in ps, otherwise I'll sound really dumb right now. :thumb: Keep up the good work!

 

[Cerus]

Just brushes?.... a bit bland for a ps user, but it looks nice anyways, maybe add a bit more light to it, maybe put a Lens flare in the background, behind the text, or even use the dodge tool around the highlights of the circles around the text. Oh and add like a slight gradient so it goes to a darker shade of blue or something, IMO it'll look better, but yeah.

Oh and add a little black stroke border.

I hope you did it in ps, otherwise I'll sound really dumb right now. :thumb: Keep up the good work!

Thought I forgot good old lens flare...hadn't dabbled in PS for a while...and I'll add the border, thanks

 

[Venetia]

it looks kind of neat, but the title screen should say something about your game, not your PS brushes.

it should have something that pertains to the overall theme of your game, or something that alludes to it. something meaningful.

i mean if BLUE SMOKE is meaningful to your game then this could work, but if not, it's just something that looks cool for the sake of being cool, not for a game title.

(like the text though, looks like devil horns. see, THAT has meaning :>)

 

[Cerus]

it looks kind of neat, but the title screen should say something about your game, not your PS brushes.

it should have something that pertains to the overall theme of your game, or something that alludes to it. something meaningful.

i mean if BLUE SMOKE is meaningful to your game then this could work, but if not, it's just something that looks cool for the sake of being cool, not for a game title.

(like the text though, looks like devil horns. see, THAT has meaning :>)

I had planned to have the main character kind of silhouetted in the background...but attempts failed in that department, but it is something I'm coming back to...so I should hopefully update it with the new stuff on there.

 

[Mascarpone]

font looks uber boring and yes as ven said this really tells me nothing about what your game could be about. .. other than theories and devils.

it's more of a desktop than a title screen.

 

[LycanGames]

I think it's a nice title screen. got a center of focus. and it's kinda cryptic leaves room for the player to imagine.

 

[DJ]

They are goood. Gasp...
can you make me one?

 

[Cerus]

They are goood. Gasp...
can you make me one?

Yes....that could be arranged

PM me with an idea etc or any stock images

AND as far as the title goes, i've been working on the game at the mo :P So ill fix it when I can