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Title Screen - Good or bad? Your Opinion please

hey^^ i just wanted to ask what you think about my title screen, what would you change?
give me your opinion^^
here is it:
RPG_Maker___Final_Fantasy_UU_by_Kauve.png


thy

Zareth
 
The bottom looks rather bland and colorless-- it seems like the yellowish glow just ends. Either extend color all the way to the bottom, or try a longer transition of colors.
 
it's a fan-made final fantasy...

bad.

Really tho you may want to look at all recent final fantasy boxes/titles and notice that they usualy are forgo the backgrounds for plain white.

also what is UU <__<
 
thx for your opinions.

@Mascarpone I think the "usual" titles of final fantasy games look... well, boring so
I made my own. I don't want to copy any Final Fantasy Title screen.
UU means UU ;) When the first demo will be released, the Title will also be released^^
Also the name of the title is maybe not the final name...

@Regi yeah you're right^^ didn't notice that at all... I thought it looks fine^^
I try to change that and will upload 2 new editions soon.
 
zareth":1wt2huz2 said:
thx for your opinions.

@Mascarpone I think the "usual" titles of final fantasy games look... well, boring so
I made my own. I don't want to copy any Final Fantasy Title screen.
UU means UU ;)

But you want to copy Final Fantasy obviously, so I would try to go with it's style all the way.
And naming it UU just because, is rather stupid. They didn't name it Final Fantasy VII just because, but because it was the seventh in the series.

Any way the logo looks quite nice, but I have to agree that you should extend the glow.
 
Ok but how would you call a compliation of many Final Fantasy Games?
There is no passable number... would you call it FF VII-2, VIII-2, IX-2 or X-3? xD
no, if you want please give me an advice for a compliation title of these four games^^

btw i do't say that i named the game FF UU just because...
UU is the shorting for the title^^
 
zareth":3othda5n said:
UU means UU ;) When the first demo will be released, the Title will also be released^^
Also the name of the title is maybe not the final name...

sry if this wasn't clear^^
oh and i also will change the title because of this problem with the UU... maybe i change it to
C like compliation and add an title like: final fantasy VII - CC (crisis core) and for the cc i take my
own letters like UU or DD...

like this: Final Fantasy C - DD (Demonic Dawn)
 
the spacing between final fantasy and uu is awful too

Final Fantasy UU

it looks bad. there is a reason the FF series is so highly regarded in the RPG world so if u really want to emulate it you better to it down to the last detail.
 
I personally do not mind the look of it aside from the lower left lighting that was mentioned before. The sun glare circle things and such are nice, though they give me the feel that it should be animated. I think it could look pretty cool if it started with the standard title on white background, giving off the normal final fantasy feel, and then had the black and white background fade in with the light effect casting across it creating the glare circles in the process and giving the feel that it is not just another copy. It would be a lot more extra work, but it sounds interesting anyway. As for the title, when you release it, the full name should be written out. FF:CC actually has Final Fantasy Crisis Core written out fully in the title. You could always try a clearer font as well that does not lead to misunderstandings between letters.

I have no issues with fan games. I do not play them, but I am not going to get upset if I see a lot of them getting made.
 
Nice, I like it. But the top and bottom strips should be totally black, right? The lens flare is overlapping it. Maybe you should fix that?

Very nice. Good job!
SEE YA!!!!!
 

paul

Member

May i suggest another back image, that back image doesn't really work with the white lion/wolf logo.
But i love the lion/wolf symbol, it fits in well with a new fan generation of the final fantasy series.
 
As a final fantasy lover i think this tile screen is Very Nice.

AS allready mentioned the spacing between FF and UU is too much, try and shorten it.

and just and idea, for the bottom where it is grey, and a diffrent colour other then yellow...something that complments it, mabe a gold color or a light red.

But other then that top notch stuff
 
Its nice, The lens-flare may be a bit overwhelming, and the lion-esq figure in the background may be vomiting blood but its interesting enough to keep my attention. The slant on the background becomes annoying to me after a little while; I think its a good concept but I think it may be a tiny bit over-slanted. There are a couple of improvements to be made but over-all its a decent title.
 
thx for your posts^^ i decided to change the title screen in a "oldschool" final fantasy title screen and
the whole story of my game is as good as finished. so the title of the game changed, too^^

so here they are:





You can see, it's more like the final fantasy games. The Head belongs to the first character Auron.
Both will appear in the game, one in the credits (before title screen) and the other one as title screen.
 

mawk

Sponsor

I'll tell you what I think after you tell me how much of this is your work. if you just found the background, and you just found the bahamut thing, then all that's left is a font, and all that can really be said to be yours is the little gradient on the underline.

so please tell me it's more than just images you found and put through photoshop.
 

mawk

Sponsor

wow, that's a solid job there. the fire does look pretty strange on the title screen itself, though.

but I posted all that after you changed your title screen. :x

the paint job in this one doesn't look so great -- mostly it's that the edges and the fill are a little inconsistent. they're softer in some places than in others. the tiered text, each with an underline, looks a little weird, too -- if it were up to me, I'd get rid of the japanese text and have "crystals of chihiru" right underneath "final fantasy" in a smaller and preferably wider (but otherwise similar) font, without an underline of its own.
 

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