Title Screen *C&C*

[Unleasher]

This is the Title Screen for my game.. need some C&C to see what I can fix on it!!
thanks!
Here is the new Title

here is the new Title Screen

 

[cactus]

I think the picture would be nicer if there wasn't clouds everywhere. I'm confused as to why there are clouds in front of the ground.

 

[Unleasher]

That has something to do with the game!

 

[Ynlraey]

At least lessen the amt. of clouds :3

 

[Unleasher]

what about this

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-1.jpg[/img]

 

[ragnaroa]

Change the color of your title to black or any other color that stands out against all of the blue.

I'm so glad people are making attempts at title screens now! :thumb:

 

[Unleasher]

Played around with the colors a little!

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-2.jpg[/img]

 

[Unleasher]

An update

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-3.jpg[/img]

 

[Cerus]

The yellow is too harsh...try to add a photo filter and the stars are too bright and I would say work on the font, I dunno it just looks too rounded and doesn't really stand out enough

 

[Zekallinos]

I would put the title on the upper-left and make it much bigger so it REALLY stands out. You could also underline it, add some tribals or nice brushes or something, so it looks more original (although it's allready quite nice).

Use whatever color suits your game most, but no over-flashy ones that kill eyes (yellow)! And blur those stars a little, they look too sharp. But those aren't stars right? 'Cause we see one that is in front of the planet.

 

[Unleasher]

how does this look

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/hyelife/LOT-4.jpg[/img]

 

[zealex]

the 2nd and 4th are the best imo
anyway the text font bothers me a lot, and the stroke around it is too uhm.. sharp..

 

[Fertility]

I think the ornament on the "S" bothers me, because it devides the title, but the title isn't balenced (more on the right side then the left side of the "S") I think for the colours, it depends on the atmosphere you're trying to convey in the game. The blue looks calm and mystical, and imo it fits well with the motif of time (depending still on what the atmosphere is, though).   

 

[Unleasher]

Alright thanks for all the C&C
I'm re doing the whole thing in 3D program and I will post a pic here soon!!

Edit:
Here is a start..
The textures are just for sample and not what will be used in final render. Trees are missing and the effects havn't been put in place yet
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y233/h ... Sample.jpg[/img]

 

[Loofah]

What is the name of the 3d program that you used?

also, it lacks atmosphere, add some cloouds and lighting.

 

[boon]

I preffered the non 3D title screens. Anyway, this one seems to lack atmosphere. Add some clouds in the sky, trees, make the water effect nicer, and shrink the moon.

 

[Teabone]

I'm loving the fourth one!

 

[Fertility]

I agree that the 3D ones arn't as great as the previous ones, but that's not to say that they can't become as good or better. The 3D one just seems so 90's imaging company logo...or Reboot, for some reason :/

 

[Unleasher]

Like I said the 3D version is not complete the atmosphere hasn't been added yet. Also the textures are temporary placements.

 

[Valse]

i need help making a title screen that looks like this how would i make one