title screen C&C please

[Nickster]

Note: i originally started out with one of the Breeze Revolutions panoramas (http://www.rpgrevolution.com/lunaproduc ... rama03.png) and i went from there. i later cut out everything except for the color gradient because i thought it was too harsh to match the style i was using. so credit to the entire Breeze Revolution team + Green Raven for the color gradient. XD
also credit to odin sphere for the plants, and... um... some person for the moon... >_>

PLEASE DONT USE THIS. it's not done yet and im using it in my personal project. if i see anyone using this i'll have to come after you. >_>

this is still a WIP and its just the base, there is no title on it yet

Spoiler: title screen here!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v463/lordnick5000/title.png[/img]

C&C please!

 

[rmxpdude54]

nice job man! this is awsome!

 

[Brismail]

It's a preety cool start, but i think you need to rotate the red moon a little, because, even from a distance, you can tell its the same picture, so maybe rotat it upside down or something, make it alot less obv.

other than that pretty good.  :thumb:

 

[Nickster]

damn, i was worried about that. thanks for letting me know its noticable.
i cant rotate it, because of the shading, it would throw everything else off. i'll blur it a little and hope it helps.


*runs off to use the necessary evil of the blur tool*
better?

Spoiler: new one...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v463/lordnick5000/title2.png[/img]

 

[RadethDart]

Not quite, what program are you using?

 

[Nickster]

Gimp. i know it wasnt a wonderful job of blurring, but i didnt want to smudge it up too much. :\
i'll fix it later...

 

[RadethDart]

Do you want me to edit it a bit?

 

[RadethDart]

Sorry, but I wanted to help you, it wasn't that hard, but I made it look different...here is the edit, no credit needed to me it was yours in the beginning...now, pretend I never did anything, it was yours the entire time.

Spoiler

http://i26.tinypic.com/2ec2e09.png[/img]

 

[Nickster]

awww... thank you! im sorry, i would have gotten around to it, but it was like 4 in the morning; i haaad to go to bed. XD

 

[RadethDart]

No worries, I had nothing better to do

 

[Xaixis]

Looks nice!

 

[xinrua]

Your moon looks very loving I wish the moon were I lived looked as smexy as that.

I also really love stars and everything theres nothing really to crit about. It's to damn sexy!

allthough it seems kind of plain. Posibble adding in some trees on the side of it or maybe even fill it in with mountains, or something in the background so it's not so blue?

I really love this it is so perfect!!

 

[tai]

It is very nice indeed. I think there should be one more faint set of plants on the left to balance out the depths. The middle is empty, but that's not necessarily a bad thing, especially considering that the title is going to be placed there. The two small crosses at the top make me think that someone is up there staring down at me. I don't know if its just me, though.....

 

[meian]

Did you rip the foreground graphics from Odin Sphere?

[edit] Okay, it took me twenty seconds on google to
confirm it. This isn't a still of the scene I was thinking of but it's enough to show you gonking it directly. Bad boy, plagarism and no crediting is for nerds!

 

[Nickster]

i actually found the graphic online, i had no idea it was from odin sphere. >_>
but thank you for letting me know where it was from, do i have to credit the moon too? i have no idea where i got it, ive had it on my computer for ages. XD

 

[meian]

If you didn't make it, you ought to. X:

But if you're not sure and don't want to go redoing it, then I suppose simply saying as much would be sufficient to most.

Not that I'm a big fan of ripping other people's works anyway, but if you're not doing your own thang you should at least take the time to credit your work, or use only credited work. Just as a, you know, thank you for other people's efforts.

 

[Nickster]

i thought i had. see? i was careful to credit what the breeze team. *points*
now ive added credit to odin sphere.

 

[meian]

Err, well, you got a third of it right?

But it warms my dark little heart to see your correction, to be sure.