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This thread is Haiku,

This thread is Haiku,
do not disregard the rule,
it's disrespectful.

All things said must be,
said in a haiku format,
that's five seven five.

There is one more rule,
do not go on forever,
you have three -- proceed.
 

mawk

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this thread is alright
internet poems are no good
but haikus might be

one thing that I hate?
Rogers mobile internet
their shit does not work

I bought two sweet coats
one pea coat and one winter
winter coat's fuck-warm
 

mawk

Sponsor

shouldn't like this band;
preppy whiteboy take on ska
but songs are genius

still, the lead guy's voice
sounds Panic! At The Disco
although more chest hair

but hey what the fuck
should broaden tastes anyway
too much rap lately
 

mawk

Sponsor

it's worthwhile to note
western haikus aren't the same
old style is different

this is just patterns
but apparently there were
like, more nuances?

not that I would know
most poetry I really hate
stuck-up berks who rhyme
 
well you see young sir
japs' syllables are diff'rent
they're more important

western lingo is
based off of sounds and letters
but theirs' is not so

theirs' are composed of
nothing but syllables which
form the words they speak

so you see then lad
western haikus are faulty
and lack the same point
 

mawk

Sponsor

I see! that makes sense
strange, though, that we adopt it
despite restrictions

and quite puzzling
how it is so popular
when it is so flawed
 

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