Theme song for a future project

[Cruelty]

This is an early work draft of a theme/title song for an upcoming project of mine that's currently in the writing/brainstorming process.

http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/8/13/1343158/september 7th 2007.mp3

Everything is programmed by myself, I don't use loops, and yes that's live guitar played by myself. =D

Let me know what you think!

 

[Fallofthetyrant]

I like it, sounds dark and mysterious, but I suggest you to put your overhead(ride) to the left ( a bit). and add a little bit of reverb with a medium predelay which will enhance the ambiance.
Good stuff.

 

[Reives]

I really like it, but it sounds more like a BGM for a dungeon rather than a title theme to me, mainly due to the lack of melody. Though that might be because I'm a little old fashioned, heheh.

 

[Cruelty]

lol, that'd have to be one chilled out dungeon reives.

actually the ride was already over about 20%. i pushed it over a bit further, and put some delay on. I added a little bit more guitar, it gives it a bit more melody, but it's still pretty much the same thing. i think it fits a game, that's about drugs, pretty damn well. :}

thanks much guys. after spending 2 hours on a song, it obviously sounds good to the guy making it, so some outside opinions are very appreciated.