Thales : Infection Of Bloodrath

[Thalesis]

Hey there everyone im working on the biggest project of my life, thanks to this place i have enough ressources for it

The Story is not one of a evil maniac wanting to destroy the world,that you must stop (so typical story thats boring)
It's based on an infection, hence humanity is one to destroy the nature, cutting every tree out, destroying lore (monsters who we can consider as Animals), expanding and also the medieval age tisn't the only age some civilizations are advanced futuristically, (where the most epic revelation comes also :P) that the planet needs to help itself,creating an infection, that may infect alive and noliving things, it kills the living,and creates itself an organism with the organism it just infected and killed. and they repand dramatically fast. since you know the world will face natures sanction, and thus nature will be reborn due to this infection, you know you got nothing about it, so it becomes personal, not worldwide, you want to change your nature, to be spared. and live in the new world.

its quite a twisted story, made also of a horror game, so cant give in that this is for kids eh.

i want some critics about my story, and dont worry, ima be making my 2nd post so soon, to show in screenshots of where i am, i show in just chapter 1 and 2, the 2nd being extremely Epic!

Spoiler: Screenshots

http://bb.xieke.com/files/Deadlypirouette.JPG[/img]
http://bb.xieke.com/files/Ice%20Map.JPG[/img]
http://bb.xieke.com/files/Coalmine%20roads.PNG[/img]

Now if you request more screenshots i may post them,aswell you can ask more questions for better details about the story, characters and battlers as such, ill share what you ask

Im totally free all night right now, its 6 PM i can stay her till like 12:00 and more. so no prob ill reply questions QUICKLY.

 

[Thalesis]

I guesse ill cancel this post.

 

[moog]

your image url with a / before the second img (/img)

also you DIDNT CLARIFY SHIT yet jsyk. read over the rules dood so this thread can look nice and sparkly

 

[moog]

ps ur story makes little sense to me :/

 

[Stupid Penguin]

Please read the project discussion guidelines.

 

[JD_Slasha]

It's CLEARLY stated in the rules not to post before you're ready.
Locked until you can read the rules and follow them. PM me with an updated thread, do NOT create a seperate topic.

ALSO everyone else, next time REPORT the thread instead of making the same posts over and over again.

EDIT: This a dupe thread of the SAME thing in Concept Development. Jesus Christ. Enjoy your warn.

Edit: Reopened.

 

[Thalesis]

Im also working on spider area, a mining building infested of spiders i would probably need a charset full of webbed people, but tis is optional actually..

heres a map SS of that spider area (ill show the mine under the building)

Spoiler

http://bb.xieke.com/files/Spider%20Cave.PNG[/img]

 

[Skyla Doragono]

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c391/ ... comeon.png[/img]

:|

Relocked until you download the REAL version of RMXP...

God, if you're going to rip off a program, be a little less obvious about it. -_-;