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TENSHI - the Fallen Angel [Style: Action RPG - Tool: RMXP]

This is an amatorial game!! i don't want it to be selled for money!! al the material is of is owner (RagnarokOnline, KingdomHearts, Torigaku, Enterbrain, XAS, SDK, etc... etc... if i've forgot someone i'm terrible sorry é.è) This game will be released for free, if you find it under payment it's unlegal and have nothing to do whit me
(i write this stuff cause i've worried about the owner of the material not made from me into the game, i don't want any kinda of truble)

TENSHI - the Fallen Angel

Project by FenriX` & YumeNo-Soft (My Team)
Link to my website YUMENO-SOFT and to the project TENSHI

Everything that's wright from now on has not the purpose to be taken seriously, i don't want to offend anyone... it's all from my imagination, don't take seriously what you'll read XD ok guys? :P

Introduction


In the ancient times the ArchAngels alongside GOD were 10, faithful and devotees to him.
There was one between them greater for strength and spirit: LUCIFER, he had an enormous power in itself and an immense love for GOD, but it was his great strength to frighten GOD, he had a power that GOD considered evil, and frightened about LUCIFER he decide to cast into the infernal abyss its most devout ArchAngels.
Outraged by this act the ArchAngels began to doubt in GOD...
They were then taken to make a decision: stay with GOD or follow LUCIFER:

To GOD's side:
GABRIEL - The Messenger
RAPHAEL - The Guardian
MICHAEL - The JusticeMaker
URIEL - The Holder

To LUCIFER's side:
ALACRIEL - The Envy
SARAEL - The Luxury
DEMINIEL - The Apathy
Ramiele - The Ira

Those who turned their backs on God were punished by him, their white wings and feathers was ripped out as a sign of disrespect, losing their powers as ArchAngels, embracing the power of LUCIFER with the following name ArchDemons (Large and scary black wings took the place of the previous white wings).
Only RADIEL was left. What sense had taken a decision, decide for one or the other faction? Both of them, LUCIFER and GOD, had their faults, nobody was above the other in power, as in wisdom... They were on the same level and had control of two large kingdoms... It was not easy to decide, and in fact he did not...
God took the decision in his place and ripped away a single wing... Throwing him into the Limbo.


The Story so far...


The gates of hell and heaven are opened, the seals broken, the plan for the clash is...

THE EARTH

Two factions collide and an exiled, alone in his crusade, will try to halt a conflict that could lead to the destruction of the planet, GOD and LUCIFER had tried for a long time to determine the fate of the war in the ultramundane plan, but the laws of eternity and infinity ban every resolution to the war, the only hope is in our world, where the concepts of eternity and infinity do not exist.

BUT WHY!!

Why this war yet, why they have to use the human beings, exploiting as puppets... This can not be allowed!
ArchAngels and ArchDemons have fell in our world using the humans body (putting into them their souls), as uninvited guests occupying these body...
GOD and LUCIFER as puppetmasters, as director of a theater will play this chess match, and one who in the crucial moment had not succeeded in taking his decision, is now able to take a choise larger then his own capacity, bring peace and justice: RADIEL fell with his old companions, occupying the body of a young man RAY.


The story takes place in our century ... A student, RAY, has a great power which is not yet known...

Start all over the HighSchool (a Technical Institute) of the city, our protagonist is... Well... In the corridor, during the lesson, why? ...How can i explain this... He's finished in punishment, yeah I know I know... He's a hothead...
the bell sound, and Rax and Ran, the best friends of the hero, coming from him... Uff... How to spend these few minutes? It would be a shame if it went wasted in no boredom?
- Rax Hey! Watch out that idiot of Alas! Is acting cool again with the girls the first year... Look at this, I'll make him a good joke...
- You'll put yourself into troubles! Ray! Stop!
And now... 2 more hours of lessons...
...Time to go home:
- Oh man, I'm so hungry!
- Hey you! Your name is Ray, right? Come with us, now!
Bad feeling about this... In the attic of the school Alas was waiting for him... This is what happens when you annoy the hooligans...

We can't call this a good day, that bastard was strong, he was hitting really hard...
Along the same road, traveled all day to go home, this time a disturbing heaviness hovered... Then, a voice in his head:
- Are you enjoying LAME?
- Again that word... LAME... Like in my dreams... Anyway... Who spoke..?

Finally back home, what an heavy day... Maybe a good sleep would have done after so many problems [...] At awakening the forehead sweat, the terror of sleep again...
What were those creatures, and what was that giant monster from the canine-beings? Then again that word: LAME...
- Damn it, I'm more tired than before, the time ... Darn! It is really late! I must be in place between 5 minutes, better Hurry!
Uff, terrible morning, terror while sleeping, and now... He's also late, darn!

Arrived late, the evening goes quiet and carefree, a bit of peace and quiet with friends, not bad: a pizza, ice cream and to spend time inside a bar in the square.
- Time to go guys! It's pretty late, if I'll not hurry going back home mom will kill me! See ya, take care and good night!
But on the way back something else wrong, that air still heavy... and... dejavu, as in that dream...
- Today you got just a taste, well RADIEL well, now you'll face me!
The first real battle begins, and this time will not be a piece'o'cake, the only power of Ray will not suffice to beat this opponent, but things do not go for the best:
A large spot of blood and the screams of Ran...

Room # 21 of the hospital, he laid in bed... Her mother, Ran and Rax on your side...
- I would not have wanted to explain the situation, but under the circumstances I have no alternative... Ray, you'll be made aware of your destiny!

...OUR STORY STARTS HERE.


Characters


RAY: The Hero, he toke in his body the spirit of RADIEL, the fallen angel, he's an hothead, cinic, a peace of shit XD not really a good guy, but he's a great sense of humor... he's a little apathic, and he try to fight this problem facing all the time terrible situation XD

RADIEL: He's the fallen angel, the Hero between the protagonist RAY, he's the good one, whit a great sense of justice, he want to save the entire world, but he'll see quick that's impossible to save the world, and that victime are a must, he'll learn RAY to be a good guy, and RAY will learn RADIEL to be a little more bastard XD
His Emblem is a Cross (the one of jesus) to the right, and a star to the left side (the sign of devil) his emblem is an union between this two emblems...
His color is the blu, like the water, pure as him...

GOD and LUCIFER: they're the leader of the 2 powerfull kingdom that reign in the Heaven and in the Hell... at their sides there are all of the 8 Archs.
GOD represents the ipocricy, the false good one, he want to prove to the other to be the good one and that this war is the only way to free the world from the evil
LUCIFER is the sadic one, he don't care to look bad, he want to wash into blood this war till the end...

ARCHANGELS: they're 4 (as the ArchDemons):
GABRIEL the messenger is like the quicksilver, fast, unstopable, constantly in a hurry, she's sure to be the stronger one in the universe... EMBLEM: Cross (Whit the look of 2 Wings) COLOR: Purple (Like the Wind).
MICHAEL the justicemaker, he's sure to be really beautyfull, he love the beauty and kill everything it's not, he's the jesus of the archangels (from the bible)... EMBLEM: Cross (Whit a crown at the top) COLOR: Green (Like the spike on jesus' head)
RAPHAEL the guardian, he's so silent, he never speak, but he love to kill and to make order everywhere... EMBLEM: Cross (Really huge, like the one of the crusade) COLOR: Gold (Like the gates of the Heaven)
URIEL the holder, from the bible uriel is the holder of the hell's keys... Here she never told her true feeling, she's false whit everyone, no one know what she's thinking... EMBLEM: Cross (Whit a key at the bottom) COLOR: Red (like the flames of the Hell)

ARCHDEMONS: As the ArchAngels they're 4:
ALACRIEL: The Envy, he's an EMO, he hate this world, he hate himself, and he turn his hate into anger in the fights... EMBLEM: Star (Whit the appearence of a Shot, his weapon are 3 guns) COLOR: Green (Green like the Envy)
DEMINIEL: The apathy, he don't really like to fight, he don't like to made anything... he want only to drink... but if he's in danger he'll fight whit a great armony, like he's playng the drums... EMBLEM: Star (A simple star, like the apathy himself) COLOR: Orange (Like the twilight, the sunset, where everything die)
SARAEL: The luxury, she's really beautyfull, he love the cool guys, but 'cause she want to be weat whit the blood of that guys, she's terrible when she want... EMBLEM: Star (Like an Heart) COLOR: Red (Like the blood, and like her lips)
RAMIEL: the Ira, she's the thunder of god, she's impulsive, she never stop, it's terrible, and she's made for the war, he love to fight to kill to be anger... EMBLEM: Star (Like a Bolt) COLOR: Blue (Like the bolts).

RAN and RAX: The 2 best friends of the hero RAY, they're all his life, always together, at school, in the evening... RAN is really shy, and is in love whit RAY, RAX is terrible XD everytime is a tornado, he's body is big and fat, and he doesn't care, and he act like a normal one, so he makes everytime a mess...


GamePlay


The game is an Action RPG, i use the XAS-BATTLE SISTEM, that hallow me the combo, and a really great experience of fight... i've modified it a little, i've put 2 slot for the skills, and no one for the item, in the battle you can call a little menù where you can replace the skills and use the items... Also... in battle you will be able to Guard yourself and to Dash into any direction... (When a battle will start the map will change, it will not be all in the same map)
In the game you'll fight little monsters as the Demons/Angels Soldiers, and huge monsters as the Demons/Angels Beasts... the A.I. of every enemy will be studied very well...

Another system used in the game is the MP3, the Hero has an MP3 whit him... and you'll be able to change your played song by pressing the A button...

The msg sistem is organized by a baloons system, the shops have the same baloons of the normal msg...

Another thing... in the game (considering a big town) the NPC will be a lot, so, for make you see which one you can speak whit i've put icons over the NPC (you'll see this in the Screenshot)


ScreenShot
For the screenshot go also here SCREENSHOT-TENSHI


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The Logo of our TEAM (it will appear before the TitleScreen)

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It's the TitleScreen, the feathers (black and white) will fall down the screen.

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Video
A little shot of what the title screen looks like (this software for the recording sucks XD) and some of the maps, the menu and the scooter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s7fLaGuafYE&feature=player_embedded

CREDITS


It will take me a little to put here the credits... for now i can credit the SDK, the XAS-ABS, and the japanese site where i've take the tilesets of the school (whit the various charas)... not more, when i'll made the demo i'll add all the necessary Credits, i promise ^.^


I think that's all for now... not other news... aah right... i've a site (In italian unfortunatly) where i've wright everything whit a better layout, everything is explained... but i don't know if it's spam for the mods... (it's not a community, just a website whit the information on my game, if it's allowed then.. pls... tell me ^.^)

At last i apologise myself for my bad english, i've used a little the translator of google anyway...


EDIT: I don't know why... but sometimes the forum don't Load my screenshot... i can't tell you why this happen... so... be patient... i'll try to fix the problem as soon as i can ^.^
 
Dude, don't pop out of nowhere like in Taken...Introduce yourself in the proper forum, it's here

Hey, introducing yourself isn't a requirement. This is borderline back seat moderating, and he/she is welcome to post their project thread with or without an introduction. -Surmuck
 
aah ok ^.^ thanks... i haven't seen that topic :P i'm sorry... anyway... don't go OT pls XD there're the PM for this things ok :D
 
Anyway... can i put the link to my site? (there are a lot of information about my game, and all the screen that here... i don't know why, are unreachable T.T)

another things... about the screenshot i've posted... how can i make them avaible? cause right now the forum load the image sometimes, and sometimes not... i don't know...
 
if you see into the spoiler near the end... i've put them like this... but i don't know why, sometimes the forum don't want to load the images... it's makes me angry =.=''
 
Men, I really like this project. I think it's one of the better projects I've seen.

Veramente bravo, avevo già commentato su Rpg2s, credo, ma in ogni caso te lo avevo detto. Bravissimo :grin:
 
Holy...
You have some serious skill there. The graphics are so smooth and match perfectly, and you've done a great job of editing XAS's battle system. I really hope there'll be an English translation, because I can't wait to play this.

Good luck with your project, and welcome to .org. :smile:
 
aah well XD it's really nice to see people interested like you are ^.^ thanks a bunch :)
anyway... i've done something new today :) the riverside :P

this one can't be a good city whitout a riverside XD and... 'cause i pass a lot of time seeing japanese anime and reading manga... you'll see it a lot similar to the one in the japanese town :)
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it's a screenshot of the map... not ingame screen... so there aren't fogs or other stuff... it's only to make you see what i've done new :) the big palace is old staff (made from 0) part of the riverside is from the rtp, and the other part is made from 0 aldo :D the street is from a japanese website, and the guardrail too, the red thing (Idrante) is from zanizora... and... i think i've done, the other stuff you see is all work of mine :)
 
Now THIS is what a RMXP game should be like! I like the story, the graphics are so beautifully made, it matches the RTP, and like fox said, the battle system loks great! Look man, for the sake of my life, please dont drop this game! I GOT to play this one.
 
ahahah XD i would like some costructive comment too... like a good critics XD c'mon ppl... the perfect game doesn't exist >.< help me out hunting any kinda of error in the prog ok? :)

P.S. right now i'm making new student for the high school... taken from Lucky star XD (konata, tsukasa etc...) i'll put into the game a lot of remake of famouse character around the town... whit different names sometimes... just for the funs... you'll see a modern version of inuyasha XD (he will not have the tessaiga, nor the "Sit down" magic word" nothing... just the same way to act)
the same will happen for sosuke sagara... and for other charas...
In the school will be the charas of "Kyo kara ore wa" and of "Lucky star"
around the town someone of "cowboy bebop" and of "full metal panic" i repeat... i wont made some kinda of cosplay... whit the original equip and wears... i'll made something that looks like the original one... but that fits perfectly the citizens' look...
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Davey

Member

The game looks pretty nice. The tilesets are awesome, and of course XAS is a great battlesystem. Can't wait to play this. :lol:

And I saw you were quite experienced in customizing XAS. Well, I'm stuck with something... can you please take a look at this? :cute:
 
i've never heard about "daraku tenshi" o.o
...
...
DAMN IT O.O THAT BASTARD!! I'LL KILL THEM ALL!!! T.T

anyway... i've a scripter in my team... i know nothing of the XAS XD but my scripter is good and know it a little :) Right now he's under exams... so he can't help you... sorry...
 
ok... sorry for the doble post... i've made 13 new characters :) and i want to make some presentation XD
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ok... in order (from the top left... to the bottom right)
Konata - Miyuki - Kagami - Tsukasa - Shiraishi - Akira - Teacher (From Lucky Star)
Ito - Takashi - The Holigan of Ibaraki (From Kyo kara ore wa) - Vice-Director - Director - Kogure (Teacher from FMP - Fumoffu)

That's all XD comment pls :)
 

Nolund

Sponsor

Wow. This is hands down, one of the best RMXP projects I've ever seen. Everything just looks so amazing.

PLEEEEEEEEEASE translate this. I would love to try it.
 
ok ok XD i'll make my best in the translation :) (whit some help surelly ^.^ but you've to wait some time before the italian version is ready... and then... i'll start the translation :) i'm waiting for my scripter to come back from the exams)
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ok... finally... i've chat a little whit those students over there... and also whit the director and the teachers... and i've made a photo of the class ^.^
these students are from different class, different hear... there are all the chara i've made myself + some of the charas taken from a different website, called Tori... (the site where i've take the tileset of the school)
ok... i'll try to introduce the charas in the screen...

In the center: Up RADIEL; Down Ray; Right Rax; Left Ran.
Then... from the upper left area, in anti-clockwise:
Alas (The Emo Holigan); Some holigans, someone of them trow kicks (I'll use this frame for the bs); [Kyou kara ore wa: Ito; Mitsuhashi; The holigan of Ibaraki ] ; [LuckyStar: Shiraishi; Akira(PinkHeared); Teacher(Biheind); Konata; Miyuki; Kagami; Tsukasa ] ; The one whit the white t-shirt and the 2 ppl above him are normal student; a random teacher; [FMP: The vice-director; the director; Kogure ] ; in the upper right angle we have Ulrie; The left students are all normal students :)
[The normal ones, has i've already said... are all taken from the internet, the japanese website whit the tileset of the school and of a lot of students]
 
Your project looks awsome! Where'd you get your tilesets? I was looking for some city/school tilesets for a project I am working on.
 

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