Techna Gardia (RMXP early project)

[Lazy Lazarus]

Project no longer shown on this forum.  sorry and thank you.

 

[So fist]

This is no longer a promotional forum.  This is a development forum.  Since your screenshots don't serve any purpose in telling anything about any of your gameplay elements/systems they have to come down to stay.  You should also check  out the new rules and adjust your post accordingly to fit into the new rules:
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/http://dev.r ... 29#p435729

Or we could move this as is to project discussion. 

Keeping the thread here will allow you to get more critical feedback on your story, system ideas, characters back stories and such.  Moving it to project discussion will allow you to leave it as is.  I'll let you make the call.

 

[Lazy Lazarus]

you can move it to project discussion.  Its only here for promotion and feedback.

 

[So fist]

Done. 

 

[Lazy Lazarus]

thanks for the move.    added a few screenshots.

 

[Heronaut]

Wow, this looks really nice. Love the story and your mapping style. I'm looking forward to this. Finish it or dies.

 

[kaidus]

Sounds like an interesting game. Mapping looks solid, although you should really check your grammar when releasing promotional material. Obviously it's a work in progress, but it doesn't create a very good impression (talking about "their" in the last screenshot).

Looking forward to it overall though.

 

[Crystalgate]

This project is really promising. The story seems interesting and mapping is looking great. There isn't much revealed about the characters personalities, but I'm getting a good feeling about them. I also like the posted gameplay elements. A minor detail though:

Elise, a famous and ingenious inventor, watches as her brother is "drafted"...

Trent, the younger son of Elise, finds himself on board a ship of other "drafted" young men...

I think son is supposed to be brother.

 

[Lazy Lazarus]

yes, you're right crystalgale, thank you for pointing that out to me.  i'm correcting that now. 

Thanks for the feedback.  check back soon, i'm working hard on this one.
I'll take your post as a request and post some more character information very soon.


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[Despain]

"im afraid they're all dead"

also that font is WAAAY TOO ANNOYING TO BE USED IN REGULAR MESSAGE WINDOWS

 

[Lazy Lazarus]

thanks for correcting my typo.  I missed that.

 

[Lazy Lazarus]

updated everything in first post.  new character info, etc.