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Strawberry Streetcar

You assumed the perspective of one that was looking for the title. I told myself to look at it as if it were unfamiliar, and not look for words, but rather have the words pop out at me. That's what would occur on store shelves, I guess.
 
Atnas;213090 said:
You assumed the perspective of one that was looking for the title. I told myself to look at it as if it were unfamiliar, and not look for words, but rather have the words pop out at me. That's what would occur on store shelves, I guess.

Well, for one thing, if a passerby took a quick look, and didn't know what the word was, he would pause for a moment to figure out what it was.

Its human nature to check out something that doesn't seem right.

Now if it just looked ugly thats a different story. Which is probably is.
 
It definitely takes holds my attention for a while, and the sloppy brushwork is an attribute that it profits from in the sense that I look at every stroke in a direction.

Damn OCD.

It's not ugly, it's refreshing and new. I just thought that maybe the t's could be cleared up, if you worked on this with layers.

I wouldn't want to mess up the gorgeous background. ;)
 
Trippy.

I love it, especially the colour choice.

But Strawberry Streetcar brings me into the same train of thought as peacetrain.... Not an entirely bad thing, just... wierd....
 

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