Soul Release

[Crystal]

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This is the current project I'm working on called "Soul Release".

The main idea of the story is about troubled spirits that have been let loose from the Spirit World into the living world. This is considered a serious offense by the the Spirit World authorities, and the person blamed is the Spirit Gate Keeper. So, the gate keeper has to take responsibility and gather these souls within a given length of time by the Spirit World or else they must face the serious consequences. Once the gate keeper gets to the living world, that's when the protagonist's real quest come's into play.

That's what I came up with so far. Any feedback?

- More information to be added

 

[bacon]

well so far its decent but i would give us some more feedback on things like setting, plot, and lore. Usually these three things tell if the story is cliche or not. So far though, its decent it just needs some more fleshing out.

 

[Perihelion]

Yeah, could you post some more info, please? There's not a lot to critique here.

 

[Crystal]

More details will be added soon! I'm currently working on the main tale of the story.