Some wip
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Her limbs seem to be breaking the laws of... everything. They don't seem to be going in any particular direction; they are going in all directions, always, never stopping.
Thank you guys for the notice on some of the parts on my wip, i have realized her legs needs to stretch more as well as the other parts thanks to you too hima. Heres another one i made from the characters of the VX maker.
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I'm not really liking that facial expression this last one has going. She looks more like an airhead who's saying, "Uhh...so I do what with this thing?" Her eyebrows should be angled downwards to make her look a little more confident if you're going for that VX girl. Her arms are a little close to her body, namely her back arm, which makes her look a little more timid and weak. Spread her arms out a little more and also point her back foot out a little more--it's hooked in, and that's a little awkward of a standing position.
Thanks for the notice tofurkey i have trouble on what to do on her expressions lately, ill try to do something about the eyebrows too. About her pose i have made some changes as you can see on my initial wips and yeah her left foot i noticed needs changes too, thanks for noticing more updates will come in later days. Also if you guys can give some reference about this VX rtp characters much appreciated, probably some artist's site as ive seen it before but i forgot what website it is.
the first and second one you made of her looks hell better then the recent ones.
the new one facail looks look lopsided the head shape it's self looks like a dude.
and it's pose seems a small unnatral as if she were drunk or just retarded.
other then that most of your artwork is okay...
Work on posess, the basic body, wrinkles in skirts/dresess, by the wrinkles I mean the most recent one, head shapes, her, can't believe I am saying this, the breast are sagged a bit, try 'em up.
everything else seems to be in order.
Good Job!
the new one facail looks look lopsided the head shape it's self looks like a dude.
and it's pose seems a small unnatral as if she were drunk or just retarded.
other then that most of your artwork is okay...
Work on posess, the basic body, wrinkles in skirts/dresess, by the wrinkles I mean the most recent one, head shapes, her, can't believe I am saying this, the breast are sagged a bit, try 'em up.
everything else seems to be in order.
Good Job!