some of my works

[blibla48]

Spoiler: afro doodle

a few facesets i made

Spoiler: faceset 1

Spoiler: faceset 2

i'll post more art later
please comment

 

[iceblue]

nice, but could you please show me the bigger image of afro doodle,,b'coz the one you have here is to small, I can't see the detail..
the clothes of faceset 2 is better that faceset 1,
but the way you coloring hair of faceset 1 is better than faceset 2..

look forward to see your next art..^^

 

[Raku]

Nice work! The first dude's hair reminds me a bit of Rukia from Bleach. Nice serious, anime feel.

The second dude looks a little off-balance to me for some reason...I think it has something to do with his cheek on the left side poking out.

Looking forward to seeing more of your artwork!

 

[Guest]

;D

 

[mawk]

a couple things:

his left eye is right next to his ear. in fact, I think he's looking at his ear right now.
actually that reminds me, generally in a face the ears are not that low. relative to the rest of the face, the tops of the ears generally align with the eyebrows or the tops of the eyes or something, I forget which. either way, though, in this picture his ear is right on his jaw. or maybe I just have my perspective wrong.

the nose is looking strange. it's mighty upturned, and I really don't see a reason to have left that one portion without an outline.

that line where the neck and torso meet is weird. I don't think there's a line there with people.

also why are they all wearing black lipstick on their upper lip??? for the first guy I can see it as creative shading but on the second it doesn't look natural.

also avoid using anime if you're just beginning art. most anime is packed with bad habits that you're better off not learning as your first style.