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Snap Dragon[HELP]

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brainstorm

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DISCLAIMER/NOTES - Snap Dragon is an Original Idea. If this is the wrong topic to put this in please move. If this isn't supposed to be at RMXP Forums at all please Delete.

Introduction:

I need help. I might be trying to make a manga/western comic by the name of Snap Dragon in my spare time. I got most of the Character Designing Down. The story and art is what I actually need help on. Story Making isn't my best suite. The Character's names are under speculation btw. The first character's names are as follows:

1. Isabella Roarek
Age: 14
Desc: She IS Snap Dragon. Story on her is unknown do to mind block.
PDesc: A Blonde 14 year old with incredible strength. She has a dragon's tail connecting from just just above her butt. A ring of spikes surround her neck(They are bones). Always wheres two shirts. One is a hairnet styled shirt. Wears one net armband on right arm and another net wristband on left arm. Wears tight Jeans and high heels
Image: [LINK] - Sketch is skrewed. Anatomy is all wrong. New Sketch soon.

2. Alan Carter
Age: 12
Desc: He's a twelve year old pest. Annoys the Snap Dragon to no end.
PDesc: A Male Brunnete(If Brunnete means girl of course). He wears what a normal, or typical 12 year old kid would wear.
Image: N/A


Okay so what I'm asking for is a story for my SPARE TIME Manga/Comic.

If it goes big (which I doubt). I'll but your name in the logo(somewhere).



Positions:

Artist - Anyone who's good at digital art. As in All I need this person to do is line sketches. I'm no good at this. I don't know haw to do it. I'm great at coloring though. YOU WILL HAVE ABILITY TO EDIT ALL ARTWORK(Only due to anatomy or dynamic errors.).

Storywriter - A good Story Writer. THIS IS MAJORLY IMPORTANT. THIS IS MY MAIN NEED. Everything that happens is basically up to you. I'll approve of the story (your story will have like a 5% chance of being turned down if it's good.)

ALL THREE OF US (WRITER, and the TWO ARTISTS) have to agree on everything that has to do with the comic before anything happens. So basically the comic will be 1/3 owned by each of us.

Ideas:

These are ideas for the story that I make during the boring parts of my day.

Dragon Kid's lost long Mother's Legacy. Dragon Kid isn't really a dragon but what if he was 1/4 dragon due to his mother being half dragon.

The Story of Snap Dragon's Super Hero Adventures. Taking Down Bad Guys using her super strength.
 

brainstorm

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Well... All I need the other artist to really do is line my sketches. I'm no good at it. Although the Artist can also do anything and everything to help. (Like make their own pages. Or anything else. The Style has to be something that looks good that's easy for me to duplicate. The Systles I'm currently good are anime/manga, western/comica, and Cartoonists. Basically the style that's in the style above. But if you join, I'll try to adapt to your sytle.

I've seen your work. Ultimately, your awesome at coloring: 8/10 at least. Your anatomy however could use work just like mine of course. 6/10 at least. An Overall 9/10. Your work is good.


EDIT::: To answer your question better?: No... But I'd appreciate it if you did.

I've been studying up on a few styles and will be adapting to the syles of the people who join.
 

brainstorm

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You.... I guess. Nevermind about the anatomy. I'd say 7.7/10 I went through a couple of your topics. Most of what you draw is Cartoony.

And yeah Your coloring is REALLY Awesome. Maybe we both can do a page or something. You do one, I do one. or something. I dunno. We'll figure something out.
 

brainstorm

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That's awesome.... That was REALLY Quick. It's great. The only thing I have a big problem with is the Legs like you said. I do see some things like spikes in the neck seem a bit long. The Shirt is a tube shirt. The Nose: Rounder. and the tail.

Those are minor. Those things are the barely noticeable but noticeable nontheless. This is Awesome.

DECISION







[ACCEPTED]




*~PS~*
*~WOOT!! I'm gettin' me a tablet!!~*
 

brainstorm

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The Tail should be more like dragon kid's. The Mascot. Thinner too btw, but The Tail should be a bit longer and the tip should be more like the pictures. You know that weird heart shape at the end.



*~PS~*
*~WOOT!! I'm gettin' me a tablet!!~*
 

Shadow_Strike

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The most important lesson of getting a tablet, that I've noticed among many people, is that it does not make you a better artist.

When I got my tablet, I'm like "Im gonna roxxorz even more with this", then I realized, I suck on paper, it carries over.

Hmmm, think you can bump Snap's Age up to 17 or something? 14 seems to young to make "rational" decisions.
 

brainstorm

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Yeah I kinda figured as much. Actually I thought it would be a little harder to draw on it. I'm just excited that I might get to try out what the pros do.

Sure. Snap can be 17 if you want her too. do you want Alan to be older well. I kinda wanted him to be the side kick who gets in the way alot. I wanted him to be immature. He's kinda like a stalker. Because she's his "superhero" figure, you know. Someone you idolize.

Oh and also maybe we could continue over PM or MSN?

sora899@hotmail.com
 

Double_Clawshot

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I can write. I have some experience writing comic scripts. If that's the kind of thing that you're looking for.

If you need a sample of a comic script you can PM me.
 
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