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[mufffin]

Hello just dumping an art of mine  :grin: .

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/8147/valhaland8.png[/img]

 

[Despain]

mufffin
going beyond the limits of MSPaint since 08

 

[Mascarpone]

is that supposed to be pit..?

 

[arbiter]

;D

 

[linkz0r]

mufffin
going beyond the limits of MSPaint since 08

epic

 

[dadevvtsvre]

:O

Wow...it's...words cannot describe it.

 

[mawk]

I think she's going to to eat the sword

She's going like "Hah! Think how delicious this sword will be! I am going to relish eating it!" all Norse mead-hall style.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

I love the sarcasm on this forum. Its ridiculous.

 

[mawk]

what sarcasm we're being serious

 

[mufffin]

haha forgive me bad... some more piontless?

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8595/girlhv5.png[/img]

 

[Energy]

haha forgive me bad... some more piontless?
*Big picture that is right above you*

Mufffin > Leonardo da Vinci

Curvy line at the end of the shoes = ???

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Well, this one's definitely better, but I suggest maybe getting a scanner instead of the horror that is Microsoft Paint.

 

[mufffin]

guy

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1610/guyag0.png[/img]

 

[mawk]

For the middle one, you should definitely work on defining her face shape a lot more. It looks like she might be a nesting doll or something, since the lines siggest that her chin leads directly into her neck without tapering back at all. I can see where her chin is just fine, but it's at such an unrealistically sharp angle and it doesn't follow through into a jawline and a neck, so the brain takes it for a random line (of which there are legions in your piece) and takes the hairline to continue the face instead. Speaking of the hairline, you could definitely do better here; I can't really say exactly what to do, but I suggest you take some looks at how long hair functions, since right now it's falling around her head in a very unrealistic manner.

The one right above me has, as with all the others, incredibly messy linework, but is solid in terms of form, although his left pant leg seems to be noticeably shorter than his right, and I don't see any reason why it shoud be bunching at his knee like that. If you'd put in the time to clean it up and colour it, I'm sure you'd come out with something very cool.

Out of curiosity, are these works from scratch? I think you could definitely benefit from buying a drawing tablet or using a scanner if you're the pencil art sort.

 

[mufffin]

@Dr. Winston O' Boogie: yep all of this from scratch, i notice also the hair and neckline thank you and all of you guys for lookin around. Heres some moar... im past my 1 drawing per week :D version 2 of sword girl, i love paint and mouse so thats all i can say.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7514 ... irllo8.png[/img]

added: shield and crappy clothes  :smile:

 

[rpdreamer]

Hey girl come to me i know you like me... just dont slice me.

 

[linkz0r]

sh*t man...

Get out of Paint and do something on paper or at least on Photoshop/Gimp/whatever other program you can find! You seem to have quite some ability to draw a decent drawing, so why waste your time on a underrated tool that will only bother you?

 

[mufffin]

yup i understand how it feels...  :blush:

some moar paint

fan art

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Quickly escape the vortex that is MS Paint. Please. I've never tried them, but Paint.net and Gimp are free.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

sh*t man...

Get out of Paint and do something on paper or at least on Photoshop/Gimp/whatever other program you can find! You seem to have quite some ability to draw a decent drawing, so why waste your time on a underrated tool that will only bother you?

Because if people fail at paint then they fail equally hard in photoshop.