Shikagun Gems:Serpent Of Shikagun

[Mooglelow]

Hi Rmxp.org Everybody who is seeing this i am mooglelow a new member and i am starting a new Project called
Shikagun Gems:Serpent Of ShikagunAnd ehh i have not finish the demo i am still trying to configure off some bugs and trying to make my title screen look better enough of my craps here is my
[Story]Once there was 5 gems....they are called the shikagun gems,They are called the shikagun gems because long ago there was a ancient city called shikagun they hold the most powerful magic called Shikagun.....The rest you will find out in the game....[/spoiler]
I will update the story soon and the characters too but can you locked the topic first i need to go to school and i will be posting a thread so locked it...

 

[Acezon]

oh. is this it?

I can't even understand it.
The story is still short.

 

[Dalton]

Oh, please... Did you even take one look at the rules? This doesn't qualify for anything...
You have no screenshots, no character bios, no short and understandable plot summary... And those are things you need to have to have a topic in project discussion.
I would love to give you advice on how to make your game better, but you didn't give me any information...

 

[Mooglelow]

sry i accidentelly click on submit i am still writing...

 

[Mooglelow]

i just click saved and wala it been posted

 

[Ellie]

sry i accidentelly click on submit i am still writing...

If this is the case then why haven't you updated it yet?

Please, read the rules and just look around at other projects and see what they are doing. If you don't have what is required in the rules then it is too early to have a project thread.

I'll give you 24 hours, to update it, and then this'll be locked. (Don't take it too harshly, understand that these rules are here for a reason.)

 

[bubbaclark]

Well besides the fact that you did not follow the rules, the story is very very repetitive. "Once there was 5 gems, the shikagun gems, they were called the shikagun gems because long ago there was a city named shikagun and held magic called shikagun.

You repeat Shikagun way too much, which should be capitalized btw. This story seems uber cliched. How do you expect to make atleast a 30 minute game out of 3 sentences too. More info, follow rules.

 

[Acezon]

Can you update your post?
I really cannot understand your game.

and..

i just click saved and wala it been posted

Are you a Filipino???

 

[Mooglelow]

i am not flipino and i am spanish but i hide my country as other country!!!!!

It's been over 24 hours and you have not updated your thread with the required information. Please read the rules and PM me or another moderator with your updated topic if you want this unlocked. ~Regi