Sean from my game

[monkeydlu]

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... an_Fc2.png[/IMG]

I've got 4 more to make, but this is the first one. I've already sketched out one of them now.

anyways, maybe you noticed, but this is a drawing from the character design of DollMage's lancer. I'm using her battlers, but I've recolored them to fit my needs.

So credits go to her for the design.

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x268 ... Sean-2.jpg[/IMG]

btw, this is only going to be used in the menus of my game.

Also, please don't use this. I doubt anyone will though, still, if you really want to, at least give me a heads up.

edit-

the full version of this drawing is also on my DA page. (in my siggy)

 

[cactus]

i'm a bit lost as to where your light source is with all those shadow.

 

[monkeydlu]

It;s shining on him from the upper left but 80 degrees to up. Meaning the light is almost coming from where you look at him from, but a to the left a bit and higher.

I'm hopping to get better, this was my first cg attempt

 

[Rare]

Its great for a first attempt.

That being said, I really don't like the black outlines...and like cactus mentioned, the shadowing needs some work.

 

[HydraulicSandwich]

Not bad, it kinda looks like those plastic things you used to put in the oven that would grow and become certain shapes, but when you fix the shadowing that'll disappear.

 

[Venetia]

I think he used the Emboss filter, atleast, that's what it looks like.

I wish his face had more detail but yeah, the most glaring thing right now with this is its overuse of filters.

 

[Ratty524]

I think he used the Emboss filter, atleast, that's what it looks like.

I wish his face had more detail but yeah, the most glaring thing right now with this is its overuse of filters.

Aside from that, It's too large.

If you put that in RMXP, it would be about the height of the last "Monster" battler, and that's pretty big. :D

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j114/ ... nter02.png[/IMG]
^ This is around the standard size for the "player" battlers, use it for reference when designing.

 

[monkeydlu]

It's not a battler, I'm using minkoff's system. This is simply for the menu ^_^

thanks for the tips, I'll keep trying.

as for the the shadows, I did use emboss, the heavy black outlining is mainly becuase I needed to make sure that there wasn't any really pixelated boarders. I'll keep trying anyways.

it's hard to show details on the face though, it's small.