Saya Otonashi PE Uniform WIP

[Malachi]

Saya(PE Uniform) WIP, which one's better?

(1
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7996 ... ormhb9.png[/img]

(2
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/185/sa ... rm1lf4.png[/img]

 

[Skyla Doragono]

Um... there's a difference?

 

[Malachi]

One has white trim on the shorts and the other doesn't ....

 

[Skyla Doragono]

I... don't think such a minor difference matters much. :|

 

[Malachi]

It's just I dunno which one looks better to use. Personally I think without the trim...but I need public opinion.

 

[Queue]

So Atemu isn't public opinion? :-\

The first one looks better, as there isn't a clash in colours. However, there isn't a clear point of light.

 

[Malachi]

Light source is coming from the left.

 

[Queue]

Direct answer as usual, not always a good thing.

The light source is only clearly hitting the hair but not at any specific points. :|

 

[JakeyZombie]

I like the second one better, a LITTLE bit more variation. (Which can sometimes be a good thing.)

 

[Samboy]

Yeah, the trim looks bad. Stick to the first one.

 

[Rye]

I don't like how deluded the shirt looks--it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the sprite. :x but the first one if I had to choose.

 

[Malachi]

What do you mean it doesn't fit? Seems to fit perfectly to me.

 

[Rye]

The really not there colors bother me.

ANother thing though, what is wrong with her shoulders? When she standing straight, they look puffed, but when she steps, they are suddenly flat again. And you didn't shade the hair on the forehead for the side view, but I guess those aren't done yet.

But really, the shirt just seems too deluted, the sleeves are funny, and well, her shoes are now funny too now that I look at them. Can't really explain how, and since I doubt you'll take any of this into considerations since you never do, I shall quit there and say good luck on a fangame.