S T A R S E E D Title Screen CnC

[Malachi]

Here's the title screen of my up and coming 10 episode science fiction series:
S T A R  S E E D: Inter-dimensional Traveller.

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What do you think?

 

[Bestone]

heh these rmxp games where you just watch what happens reminds me of a long long ass time ago when 5 1/4" floppy's were still around, infact they were on them, these little animations of a stick dude that ran around and did crazy stuff and died, i got one of these floppies with them in the mail every month. it was hilarious

Like the title screen, its good, whens it release?

 

[Malachi]

When I start on the actual thing. I'm making this for an important reason so I want it all to be perfect hehe. You like the title screen? That's good ^_^

It follows a young starseed who has awakened to his true self, and his path to awaken the planet Earth in order of the mass ascension that is to occur. He discovers the task is much more difficult than he had originally thought when he is confronted by the Reptillians who do not wish for humans to leave the Third Dimensional reality. He's aided by fellow starseeds who too have the same task as he.

 

[iceplosion]

The title screen is awesome, the story seems a little odd though.

 

[Malachi]

Ah I've since changed the story.

The Watcher is dropped into another(smaller and simpler) world, that is also in terrible trouble, due to wars, violence, and ecology. The world is a place of great beauty, and its problems are minute when compared to Earth. There is a "guiding light sphere" that has placed the character in this world explaining that there are lessons that have to be learned, so that the player can return home to put into action the learning and help their own world. So, in order for the characters to return home, they must first find out how to help this smaller world.

Did I mention is a

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

Ah I've since changed the story.

The Watcher is dropped into another(smaller and simpler) world, that is also in terrible trouble, due to wars, violence, and ecology. The world is a place of great beauty, and its problems are minute when compared to Earth. There is a "guiding light sphere" that has placed the character in this world explaining that there are lessons that have to be learned, so that the player can return home to put into action the learning and help their own world. So, in order for the characters to return home, they must first find out how to help this smaller world.

Did I mention is a

i like the background image,
anyway, your not an english dude are you?
just noticed it xD... ignore me...

about your avatar
the katakana seems wrong...
The katakana reads Aresu Naiirosu
it should be アリクスナイース - Arikusu Naiirosu desu ne?

well just ignore me xD

 

[Malachi]

Actually I am english XD Born in England, bred in New Zealand.

yes it should be アリクスナイーロス I made that avatar when I first started learning Katakana XD

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

Actually I am english XD Born in England, bred in New Zealand.

yes it should be アリクスナイーロス I made that avatar when I first started learning Katakana XD

My bad xD