Ryu Kamasaka

[novice]

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This is the suit my main char is going to  be wearing the game is going to feature Visual Equipment so this will be a two part suit Pants and Shirt...

 

[Grathea]

OK... I see a few things you could do to make this better. First, the clothes cut off at rectangular angles, or so it seems to me from this size. Also, they could do with rework so they look less pillow-shaded and more realistic. Finally, I'd recommend you extend your palette. As it is, you've only got two distinct shades per color; try for about four to six.

 

[Anonymous]

Agreed, decent.....But could be a lot better!!