RMVX Edit... C&C please

[kidd6686]

With help from the VEX Template I cam up with this concept. . .

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I think it looks decent myself just need twinked C&C away!

 

[Prexus]

Actually that does look decent, although the boots look a little flat and the shading on the skirt is not consistent with the hair.

 

[kidd6686]

would you like to twink it for me so i can see my flaws in shading

 

[|3_32]

They Say Practise makes perfect, so keep at it.  Although prex has stated the boots and shading need some work, I can't help but think the hair and the shoulders have been ripped straight fom the VX sprite with only  aminor edit too them.  Even though the shoulders look alright, the hair seems too short.  Maybe you should extend the hair downwards a little.  Same with the cloak, although that looks ok as it is, since its a girl with a short cloak, its kinda works.

 

[kidd6686]

your exactly right thats what the boots and everything else is throwing it off . . . i try though lol i cant wait to see how he fixes it :D