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Resources of my game! *New

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Those are the resources of my game:D
What did find?

I made the char's

Lorena:)_____Consuelo;) _____Shiro:mad:
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Consuelo2.png
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Amaya:)_____Naoko;) _____No have Name:mad:
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*New Char's*:lol:

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Comment on plz

NO RIP PLZ

bye
 
woah they are good.
Not sure about the last one, and the middle one isn't showing enough boobs compared to the picture. (Teehee)
 

Rye

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They look really nice, but I have to agree with El Felixio, not enough boob on the second one if you're trying to sprite the characters as close to the original picture as possible.
 
Actually i took the time to enlarge consuelo's character, and i see that the clevage is big enough.
But the problem seems to be that since the clothes are to bright, there's no real distintion between the end of the clothes and the beggining of the formerly stated "boobs".
What i mean, is that the boobs ARE in there, but you can't see them because they blend with the clothes. Try to darken the outline between flesh and clothes to mark where does it ends.

Besides that, they are excellent.
 
Onsokamaru said:
Try to darken the outline between flesh and clothes to mark where does it ends.
I think it's because the neck collar place is too high compared to the pic, if you lower it and do what Onsokamaru said then it'll be perfecto.
Oh yes, and on closer inspection: The scarf on the first need to be bigger, but not too big and the head on the last one is too high. Lower it or give him more clothes around his neck.
EDIT: with the second one on the first one, the skin around the collar kinda merges with the clothes so it's harder to see, and you need to outline the hair fringe where it folds neatly on the pic. (Part it or make it curve around her forehead)
 
No. 2 of the second is better than 1, and I prefere 1 to 2 on the last one.
(Something tells me that these characters are gonna be something very special)
EDIT: Maby you went a bit far with the shadows of the second one's privte area (Looks like she had an accident)
 
Sorry for being a bit off topic, but where are the pictures from, they look familiar...

And to stay on topic...just a rehash of other's comments, more contrast between #2's breasts and clothing. ver2 of #2 and ver1 of #3 are the better ones
 
Those are sweeeeeet.
Those last new character's are very Ragnaroky like in their colours and stuff. Well done!
I'll inspect them closely now...Mehehe

EDIT: The second one's arms need looking at, they seem either long or a the wrong angle, and the third one's hair needs to be more bushy because it seems to tidy to fit with the hair strands sticking out on the side. The last one looks too tall too me, but I know it's the same size as the others, but I found it's because if the armour, it's too short, put in some leg plates of something.
 
Tks for the comments
I will adjust the char's ^^
the new ones I did, I wanted to do in the style same Ragnarok ^^
hehehehhe

Bye
 

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