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Rensai

EDIT: Since I started the project already I though it'd be best if I updated the thread info.

I only had a recruitment forum so I'd though I'd post it as a project now.

Title:
http://www.freewebs.com/haif76/title-1.png[/IMG]

Backround info:

History

It all began in the land of Rensai. Over two hundred years ago a comet struck the earth and shattered into many pieces. These pieces flew in different directions across Rensai, most were lost but a few struck some of the residents spread across the land. While most were hit and killed by the impact, eight survived because the shards were smaller and slowed down by distance. The eight that survived found that the pieces could not be removed because their bodies fused the pieces inside them but formed a protection so that the pieces wouldn’t poison them. Each piece gave the person the ability to control a different element. The pieces also gave them the characteristics of the en-fused element but they still remained human. The elements and people who got hit were:



1. Water – Attracts any water and can be manipulated to the user’s desire.
Krail – A farmer who was working in his fields when he was struck.


2. Fire – Absorbs all the heat energy and transforms it into flame.

Naeni – A noble who was on her way home when she was struck.



3. Earth – Gives power to control all earthen material.
Scaex – A teen sleeping in his bed when he was hit.


4. Wind – Controls the air and concentrates it to the creation of the user.

Jula – A shop owner who was closing up shop when she got hit.



5. Thunder – Charges the particles around the user and creates powerful voltage.
Zialo – A poor man who was walking the streets of Sheto when he was hit.



6. Ice – Freezes liquids and then gives control.

Methira – A sailor who was docking in when she got hit.



7. Solar – Harnesses the power of the sun.
Beiran – A traveler who was heading to Rai when he was struck.



8. Lunar – Harnesses the power of the moon.

Ksia – A thief who was robbing a house when she was hit.



Each one had their own weaknesses and strengths. The eight survivors found out one by one that there were other survivors through word of mouth. They then decided to meet and determine what should be done. Seven of them decided it must be hidden away for those who might abuse and conquer with it. Ksia disagreed because she had been corrupted by her thief instincts and wished to abuse it. She played along till the meeting was over and then planned what she would do. She used her power against the others. While she tried to destroy them, the others teamed up and used their powers to overpower his. Because of Ksia’s thief skills she managed to avoid their attacks but after a long battle, the other 7 won. They then sealed the 8th power off, believing it to be to dangerous. Two centuries have passed and the powers have been passed down and spread generation by generation. The Lunar power was forgotten and those who do remember only know legends and dismiss it as merely that; legends.

Main Characters:

Laein: Male | Axe | Main Character. | Laein was born with the power of Ice. Lives in Prie.
Sprite:http://www.freewebs.com/haif76/Laien.png[/IMG]

Arice: Female | Spell caster | Arice was born with the power of Thunder. Lives in Lasia.
Sprite:http://www.freewebs.com/haif76/Arice.png[/IMG]

Raims: Male | Sword | Raims was born with the power of fire and uses it to create weapons. Lives in Sible.
Sprite:http://www.freewebs.com/haif76/raimsfg7.png[/IMG]

Fae: Female | Staff | Fae was born with the power of water and used it to become a priestess. Lives in Rai.
Sprite:http://www.freewebs.com/haif76/Fae.png[/IMG]

Irv: Male | Thief | Irv was born without a power so he only believes in his knives. Traveler

Piolu: Male | Swordsman | Piolu was born with the power of wind. Lives deep in the earth.

Rhandon: Male | Only uses his Power | Rhandon was born with the power of fire. Lives in Sheto.
 
Maybe it would have been wise to post 'Rensai' in your thread title, that is probally why you aren't getting a lot of attention.

Request a mod change the title for you.

Peace,
EiB
 

Lexy

Member

Un don't wana sound rude here but isnt this sort of like Inyuasha i mean kagome hit the jewel with an arrow braking it into a bunch of shards and people embed them into their bodys for demonic powers
 
Inuyasha? Weird.....I've heard of it but I never knew that... And who's "Kagome"?

And Myo, I mean that I need to know what people think of it. I don't want to take a storyline and just make a game if no one will want to play it when I'm done.
 
Why weren't they killed? And why did they get super powers? Where does this comet originate? Why did the pieces fuse to their body? How did they find out about the other survivors? The beginning of the Opening is a little confusing, there are wrong words used, such as "knew" for new.

If you answer those questions your background story will be much more creative, attractive, and in-depth.
 
Well, the first question is already answered, Their injuries were not fatal so that question has no need to be there. Comets can just come from space without knowing how they originated. The other questions I will work on answering. It won't be too hard.

^^Rye: I want to make a game, the thing is, I am building it up from an idea I just brought out. After I wrote it out there were many changes that already had to be made and I knew that. I also know that a game can't just be made from what a person thinks and then be a best seller. Everyone needs backround info on what has and hasn't been done. My story I am willing to change to an extent. As long as it revovles around the same Idea. So I think that answers your question tell me if it didn't.
 
Well, the answer to question one wasn't very creative, it is kinda...dull...maybe have the shards go through glass which slows them down and stops them from ripping the person in two, or something like that :)
 
So you want a more........."descriptive" answer. Alright. I have a lot of stuff to do this vacation. I can't promise you it now. Or tomorrow because I have to clean my room but if I finish I will. Then on christmas well, its christmas. I'll have it done for sure on tuesday though.
 
I'm just giving you constructive criticism, take you time on it. If you rush it, it won't turn out near as good as it could.
 
Well, I was busy for a bit longer than I expected, I have added 2 things to answer the questions as far as I could. Let me know if theres anything else.

History

It all began in the land of Rensai. Over two hundred years ago a comet struck the earth and shattered into many pieces. These pieces flew in different directions across Rensai, most were lost but a few struck some of the residents spread across the land. While most were hit and killed by the impact, eight survived because the shards were smaller and slowed down by distance. The eight that survived found that the pieces could not be removed because their bodies fused the pieces inside them but formed a protection so that the pieces wouldn’t poison them. Each piece gave the person the ability to control a different element. The pieces also gave them the characteristics of the en-fused element but they still remained human. The elements and people who got hit were:

1. Water – Attracts any water and can be manipulated to the user’s desire.
Krail – A farmer who was working in his fields when he was struck.

2. Fire – Absorbs all the heat energy and transforms it into flame.
Naeni – A noble who was on her way home when she was struck.

3. Earth – Gives power to control all earthen material.
Scaex – A teen sleeping in his bed when he was hit.

4. Wind – Controls the air and concentrates it to the creation of the user.
Jula – A shop owner who was closing up shop when she got hit.

5. Thunder – Charges the particles around the user and creates powerful voltage.
Zialo – A poor man who was walking the streets of Sheto when he was hit.

6. Ice – Freezes liquids and then gives control.
Methira – A sailor who was docking in when she got hit.

7. Solar – Harnesses the power of the sun.
Beiran – A traveler who was heading to Rai when he was struck.

8. Lunar – Harnesses the power of the moon.
Ksia – A thief who was robbing a house when she was hit.

Each one had their own weaknesses and strengths. The eight survivors found out one by one that there were other survivors through word of mouth. They then decided to meet and determine what should be done. Seven of them decided it must be hidden away for those who might abuse and conquer with it. Ksia disagreed because she had been corrupted by her thief instincts and wished to abuse it. She played along till the meeting was over and then planned what she would do. She used her power against the others. While she tried to destroy them, the others teamed up and used their powers to overpower his. Because of Ksia’s thief skills she managed to avoid their attacks but after a long battle, the other 7 won. They then sealed the 8th power off, believing it to be to dangerous. Two centuries have passed and the powers have been passed down and spread generation by generation. The Lunar power was forgotten and those who do remember only know legends and dismiss it as merely that; legends.

Main Characters:

Laein: Male | Axe | Main Character. | Laein was born with the power of Ice. Lives in Prie.

Arice: Female | Spell caster | Arice was born with the power of Thunder. Lives in Lasia.

Raims: Male | Spear | Raims was born with the power of fire and uses it to create weapons. Lives in Sible.

Fae: Female | Staff | Fae was born with the power of water and used it to become a priestess. Lives in Rai.

Irv: Male | Thief | Irv was born without a power so he only believes in his knives. Traveler

Piolu: Male | Swordsman | Piolu was born with the power of wind. Lives deep in the earth.

Sirus: Male | Knight | Mercenary | He is found throughout the player’s journey in various towns.

Riyu: Female | Archer | Mercenary | Same a Sirus but found in different town. Sometimes both are in the same place sometimes neither is there.

Rhandon: Male | Only uses his Power | Rhandon was born with the power of fire. Lives in Sheto.



Opening

One day Rhandon hears the myth of the Lunar power. He look’s into it and finds that any traces have been removed. He refuses to give up so he continues. He abandon’s anything he had left and wastes the next seven years of his life in search of it but he only finds books that contain the same legends with small details changed. Tired, he gives up his search and decides to move to a quiet town called Prie. He meets Laein as he moves into his new house. He watches Laein and studies him. One day he notices it seems a lot darker, he looks outside and sees no reason for it. He asks Laein if he can pick up his books he ordered from Lasia Fort for him. When Laein leaves, Rhandon decides to check out the library and see if it has any information on the Lunar power in case there is a book that says something about a strange darkness.
He goes up the road to Prie’s library. The library used to be a tower that was used as a prison. He goes into the cellar of the library and looks at the oldest part of it; he has found that any legends on the Lunar power are usually in the oldest part. He discovers that it goes much deeper into the recesses of the tower. After a long spiral staircase he finds the bottom is frozen. He uses his fire to melt the ice and then continues down. He finds it is a tomb, with only 1 sarcophagus. He opens it and is thrown back against the wall. He uses his power of fire to create a light and goes to check the sarcophagus. Hr finds a skeleton lying in a twisted position, almost as if forced inside. There is a glowing rock under the rib cage of the skeleton. He goes to pick it up and when he touches it, it jumps at Rhandons finger and then dissolves into it. With a strange feeling coursing through his veins and strange memory’s appear in his mind. Before he can do anything he realizes that the soul of Ksia was inside that rock along with the 8th power. Ksia takes control of Rhandon and then goes to seek revenge on the world that imprisoned him and obtain the rest of the Power. Ksia uses Rhandons power over fire and burns the town that has been erected over his tomb to the ground. Laein is just coming back when he sees the flames. He drops the package and goes into a sprint. Laein is too late and he finds his entire town burned to the ground with his loved ones dead.

Too Be continued in the game……
 

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