Ravin Title

[JekGamer]

I was aiming for kindof basic for a title, but I want to know what you guys think of it.
http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff30 ... /title.png[/img]
Here it is with the start window on it.
http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff30 ... itle-1.png[/img]
Im annoyed ny the little fake copyright at the bottow, so that will get removed.

 

[l0rdph0enix]

I would kind lower the quality of the wing itself. Not make it as detailed. Other then that it looks good.

 

[Emtch]

IMO it needs better composition. Just a wing with a logo on it in the upper left corner and nothing anywhere else looks strange.

 

[frenzy95]

you should something to the back ground like a stencil or something.
other than that it looks cool.

 

[Xilef]

I think you should just vectorise the wing to make it work with the raven cut out, and did you spell it Ravin on purpose? I thought the title to this thread read: Ravin' Title - like: "This is one ravin' title. Check and dig, yo."

The title screen as a whole seems almost too simple actually. Add a sky and a moon to it? A sillouhette of a city or something?

 

[006]

Try a few falling feathers.

 

[zealex]

Nothing to think about it really, way too basic and the edges of the wing are choppy.