Rate my Windowskins, please!

[Larynni]

Hey guys. I think I've just made my 2 best windowskins, and I was wondering if you guys could please give me some constructive feedback =] I'd be very thankful.

This one is for my game (The Next Paladin - The Creation of Paladinism)
http://i29.tinypic.com/2cp49bp.png[/img]
In action...
http://i29.tinypic.com/v7zh50.jpg[/img]

This one was made as a request.
http://i28.tinypic.com/xfdz54.png[/img]
In action...
http://i31.tinypic.com/rshqm8.jpg[/img]


(The first one CAN NOT BE USED, but the second one can be used with credits.)

 

[rikuken]

If you do not want people to use it then just show an example. These aren't that bad either, good work! Keep on Going!

 

[Larynni]

Thanks for the first post... o.0
But, yeah... I like to show the base to show people how did I make it.
More feedback please?

 

[rikuken]

You should write do not use on it then. There's nothing wrong with it. It's perfect.

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

but why yellow? i hate yellow xD not actually hate it
but some yellows hurts me eyes

 

[rikuken]

Well yeah yellow isn't a really great color for message boxes.

 

[Larynni]

It's... golden... o.0
I used the same pallete for the jewel... o.0

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

it doesn't look like golden to me xD
maybe it doesn't fit very well as a window...

Anyway
goodwork on the 2nd one.. I like Blue :D

 

[adelaidechoc]

Hi Lyn! The blue one IS GREAT!
As for the first one, rather than bordering the font, why not change the font color instead?

 

[Airose]

I love them, especially the blue rose one. <3 Favorite flower ya know.

 

[busbuzz]

Hmmm nice originality i shall say... they are really good keep it up  :thumb:

 

[Larynni]

Hi Lyn! The blue one IS GREAT!
As for the first one, rather than bordering the font, why not change the font color instead?

What font...? Ah, the font color.

Thanks guys!

 

[Hanzo Kimura]

add some darker borders in the yellow windowskin to fit it right