Rate my Title Screen (Please)

[Shadowstory3]

I do not claim all of these pictures as my own except for the background image and the words but the guy standing I did not make, or the black cutscene thing. But I do take credit for putting this all together. Well anyway here is my image

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc56 ... /Title.png[/img]

Isn't photobucket lovely, no links!


Please rate me on my first ever custom made title screen!

 

[Toams]

With what program did you make it?

Anyway, someone correct me if I'm wrong, but the title's a bit un-readable.
Or at least it's difficult to read..
Maybe you should add some white or bright outline to the text..
Texts with multi-colored backgrounds often have contrasting colors in them, to stand out.

I also have no clue about where your newgamecontinueexit-popup is supposed to be.
You might wanna open up some space in the bottom middle of it, 'cause that's where it's generally at..
I wouldn't want to see a title screen with something partly over the title.

Apart from that, the setting is good.
I'm guessing the character is the main character, and the screenshot in the background is pretty enough.
It's good to see you adapted the screenshot colors to the character..

So much for my opinion.. I hope it helps.

 

[Shadowstory3]

You just gave me a great idea on improving my picture! make the black words shadows of the words.

Anyway I used a nice free program called Paint.net
Yes thats the program name NOT the website.

I covered the continue thing, well anyway here is the edited title.

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc56 ... itle-1.png[/img]