Dead Content Quitting University- Demo Version

[Vanessa1214]

I write this demo to prepare me for a larger project and complex story
this is a relatively short game, consists of around 45mins gameplay,
a short story. So please feel free to try it out, thanks! Note that
This is a comedy. With some joke elements.

Plot
Selina Hernandez was a final year CityU student,
she decided to quit university after
discussing with a professor, she wanted to apply for
a course provided by another university,
She wanted to meet the staff of
that university at the CityU entrance, however, CityU would do
everything to stop Selina leaving, they released
mutant monsters from the laboratory to pursue her,
and also hired a private military company to capture her.
Her mission was to overcome every challenge and to make her
way to the exit.


Features
Please forgive me that Chapter 1 contains a lot of standard
RTP materials, but trust me that
Chapter 2(laboratory) and 3(highway) consist of mainly custom maps and bosses
created by myself,

Special features
-----elevator and various machine
-----escape the bomb
---- Aircraft and mecha actors/human actors
-----custom animation such as missile
-----Charlie Lee's CTB,
-----you can use the crystals to save the game

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download link

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http://rapidshare.com/files/251074525/escaping_from_cityU.exe

Walkthrough

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You can quickly finish Chapter one by talking to the stone
on the upper right corner, then talk to the water pipe,
and go up one screen and talk
to the pig, come back an talk to the stone again. It will
give you the dock key, you can go up one screen and open the
door on upper right corner.

You can talk to the monster on bottom and choose the fourth
answer to learn TELLING LIES
Remember not to fight the angel in the tent, you can get 10
potion in the treasure box.
Item is very limited in the game


Remember not to judge a person by his external appearance.

Disclaimer:
This story is based on a fictional university only



CREDITS and Thanks

Graphic Resources

DerVVulfman
Minkoff
Arnold Schwarzenegger Terminator face picture
Enterbrain

battle system,

Sandgolem
Charlee Lee
Trickster
Atoa
Cairn
Enu
Kyrlock
Mr.Bubbles


message system
Ccoa

SDK scripting

SephirothSpawn
Synthesize

 

[Twin Matrix]

Constructive criticism:

- Your battlebackgrounds are really ugly and don't match the rest of the graphics at all. e.g. in the collegeroom one, the characters are floating above the chairs. Uuuuhh...
- You need a spelling & grammar check really bad. Each dialog window is filled with mistakes.
- The enemies mostly lack shading.
- In the street-blockade screenshot, you see the line where the panorama ends and begins. You need to make a script edit so that the panorama does not move.
- The face-pictures in the message windows are very ugly and random and lack cohesion.

 

[seven]

Also learn how to map properly with the RTP. If you look at the sixth screenshot, there's plenty of misuse of the default tileset, along with a generally poor concept of logical proportions for the room.

 

[xeilmach]

I see good potential with a little more graphical improvement nonetheless.

 

[cordynasty]

Looks like a 4chan type of game. :lol: