Prophecy Parchment for ToE

[archerRin]

Can someone critique this and also the poem? Thanks.
I wanted a clean look that's not overly textured so its easily readable

 

[Mooglelow]

Doesn't look bad, nice jon archerin how did you get the background anyway did you make it???

 

[archerRin]

Thanks. It is a stock from http://sxc.hu

 

[MCsephiroth13]

It makes absolutely no sense for paper yo be rolled up on the sides like that. Where it's rolled up at the top looks perfect, but I think you should edit out the rolled up parts on the sides.

 

[archerRin]

okay good point updated.

http://i27.tinypic.com/168h836.png


can anyone critic the poem

 

[MCsephiroth13]

That looks MUCH better and more realistic. As for the poem, don't make every line of the poem start with an oversized, bold letter. It makes it look like an acrostic. Just keep the 'D' at the beginning the way it is.