Project_Eden (VX)

[elder]

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[Skie Fortress]

This is looking really impressive. I especially like the custom rtp pieces and artwork presented so far. Nice work. :3

 

[Axerax]

This looks promising. I like the art work, is it made by you or someone else. The sprite style is a bit different than expected from most VX games, but hey, work with it. I'll watch this project some, nice work so far. :3

 

[moog]

Make sure you lose the screens if you want to stay in this forum :3

It sounds like you are putting tons of effort into this, so Ill come back later with some more feedback.

 

[Joy]

This looks very interesting. I'm a big fan of rpgs with lots of puzzles (hence why I'm making one as well) so I'll definately be keeping an eye on this one. Your mapping in VX is also very good, you're creating a good feel in those maps. And those character portraits are great, good show all around.
I do have to agree ith Moog, this is advanced enough that it should belong in the main project forum.

 

[elder]

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[So fist]

Elder this is not an advertisment forum.  It is a development forum.  The screens have to go since they are promotional and explain nothing about your story or systems.  Please read the rules of this forum:
http://www.rmxp.org/forums/index.php?topic=46083.0

And update accordingly.  Otherwise I'm locking this at the end of the day.

 

[elder]

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[moog]

What? Just lose the screens and you can stay? How is that so hard.

 

[elder]

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[MukanshinBlack]

The first post is such a pain to go through... use spoilers plz. [spo iler][/spo iler] without the space in the middle.

 

[elder]

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[Ynlraey]

Wow I really like this one :D
I love how customized it is

 

[dadevvtsvre]

Oh, wow.
Those are really nice custom RTP pieces.
They are really quite beautiful screens, as well.
Good luck!

 

[MukanshinBlack]

Thanks for putting in spoilers.  It's not really needed, I think, but people like me like them. ^_^

You said you put in alot of time on the game, and it shows.  The plot seems interesting enough, and the artwork is nothing less of fantastic but the screenshots are questionable.  They are all pretty random, and although the mapping is decent it's not the best (it can actually use much improvement).  You don't tell us the features your game will have.  What kind of scripts are you using?  Also what is the combat like?  Front-view battle system, side-view, or active?

All-in-all, it looks like a thought-out game but some information is lacking.

 

[Sonata]

This looks quite impressive. I'm curious about the plot though, you should at least give us a brief synopsis, and maybe introduce a few characters.

Your screenshots are some of the best I've seen utilizing VX's RTP, my only complaint is in the world map shot, in the bottom right corner, it looks awkward to have a flower on every tile. Your artwork also looks great, no complaints there.

 

[elder]

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[MukanshinBlack]

I don't think it's going to be locked.  It explains your project and that's enough to keep it open, I'd think. 
A game of only puzzles?  I'm not sure how many people would buy it if so.  Puzzles are like a plus for a project.  I don't know how good you'll do if that's the only thing your project is. 
Also you said you used no scripts...  Scripts give customization to RM games, which then give uniqueness to RM games.  As for the battle system, front-view gets very boring very quick.  Maybe you should think about including custom scripts in your project.  It's your decision but seriously I can't imagine how good a pure RTP game would do commercially.
You say you tried your best with mapping but the end result is decent.  A lot of work is still needed in this area.
Although some of this game "looks" good, no custom scripts and full RTP won't make it sell since it's supposed to be commercial.  I really can't imagine anyone buying a VX game made of only RTP.  Unless it's under $5.

 

[Sonata]

A game of only puzzles?  I'm not sure how many people would buy it if so.  Puzzles are like a plus for a project.  I don't know how good you'll do if that's the only thing your project is. 

 

I disagree. Puzzles as a focal point has a lot more potential than a game where you solely walk around battling. Often you'll find that battles in RM games grow tedious very quickly, however puzzles add fresh content and in my opinion are very important.

As well, I disagree with your opinion on the mapping. Maybe I'm not up to date on the expected quality of VX maps, but they look pretty good to me.

 

[elder]

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