[PPP] Wyatt Sprites

[Ellie]

So yeah, I been doin' some spritin' or somethin'.

Completed Works

Spoiler: Gimme pppoints

Works in Processins

Tilesets

16x16 Ruins Tileset (WIP).

Need crits badly



NB: I'm not sure of the rules regarding pallettes, but I can change if need be. The pallette used is half myself, half Refmap (First Seed Material).



A second WIP:

 

[WeaponOD]

More contrast/shadowing maybe? Especially in the cracked brick.

The spacing between the swastika lines are different... Looks sorta odd.

 

[Berserker]

The shading is VERY messy. Clean it up please.

 

[Ellie]

I don't get what you mean but I'll work on it.

A bit more progress:

 

[Perihelion]

Wyatt, you're gonna wanna change your palette anyway. This one is very bland--make the colors more vibrant and add more contrast. Also, instead of pasting one brick over and over, make a few for variation. And the banner looks better than it did in IRC, but more contrast. Your biggest problem is that your palettes are washed out and low-contrast. Be bolder with your colors!

 

[Ellie]

Hmm, I get ya.

I've tried making my own pallette instead, I'm not sure how well it's worked but the colours seem to "pop" more than in the other.

 

[boon]

Hey nice flags wyatt :3

Sadly I must change my avatar... even though swastika's were around before the nazi's.

 

[Berserker]

You need to add more colour to your palette, so that it POPs more. Add more yellow to the lighter shades and blue to the darker shades, its really makes a difference.

Also more contrast please!
How many shades are you using for the bricks? since its 16x16, you should need more than 3-4.