Poster for Project

[Fate]

A Poster for my up coming project, enlightened by War Films. Using my new macromedia fireworks, i love it.


http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/9569 ... ta1ri6.png[/IMG]

Comments please, some of the credits names are wip, i will eventually replace. but most are real. Please be as horrible as you can be i can edit it to the best standard.

 

[Chaosg1]

I can't see a thing.. .:S

 

[Fate]

Its bigger on paper thats just how big it is when i got it on the comp, i can read it can't you?

 

[Makio-Kuta]

Looking pretty nice. I really love the reds and oranges in the sky. Though, the stars you put in there, look really odd. I think it would look better without them, because 2 stars...that looks a little strange.
Also, the character has a strange white glow around some of his edges, I'm not sure why you'd want to do that...but it really jumps out at me. If it's supposed to be a highlight, it would look better redish orange, to match the light source.

The layout of the poster and overall design is nice. It sort of brings out this...one man against the world, feeling. Just those two things (and maybe also the strange colour distortion in the blues and purples of the sky at parts) jump out at me and kinda take away from the over all image.

Did you make the sky yourself? Or use a photo?

 

[Fate]

Looking pretty nice. I really love the reds and oranges in the sky. Though, the stars you put in there, look really odd. I think it would look better without them, because 2 stars...that looks a little strange.
Also, the character has a strange white glow around some of his edges, I'm not sure why you'd want to do that...but it really jumps out at me. If it's supposed to be a highlight, it would look better redish orange, to match the light source.

The layout of the poster and overall design is nice. It sort of brings out this...one man against the world, feeling. Just those two things (and maybe also the strange colour distortion in the blues and purples of the sky at parts) jump out at me and kinda take away from the over all image.

Did you make the sky yourself? Or use a photo?

Thanks alot, ill get rid of the stars and the outline, but then it is sharp, ill try and sort it out , The photo to be honest is not mine i got it from the internet but i deserve it from how long i looked lol

Thanks dude

 

[Makio-Kuta]

lol Dudette!
And no problem. Good luck with it.

 

[djzalzer]

Hey,

see that movie font at the bottom? There's a font somewhere on dafont.com that does all the work for ya, and looks really authentic... It's called Steeltongs, and IMO it would look a lot better than Tahoma or whichever font you've got.

http://www.dafont.com/steeltongs.font

 

[Fate]

Ahh yes thanks alot dude, Can i say something to everyone, it would be ncie if you put this in your siggy just to know every whats coming new to rmxp

And another poster, thisis for all the ones put together. The sihlouette is of Hitler.

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6453/poster2so6.png[/IMG]
C&C please

 

[badmonur]

im not quite sure if that thing next to the text is cloth or metal. Lots of empty space in the poster also.