Pokemon Graphic (PA)

[siarra73]

Well, Its not my art so not much to critisize, All I did was merge the bed and Ash together, and change Ash's expression. But anyway here it is, free to use:

http://i28.tinypic.com/syrxag.png[/img]

Updated!
Now has the hat turned on the last frames.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/si ... shBed2.png[/img]

Another Update!
Now, He has no hat, and some blue pajamas.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/si ... shBed3.png[/img]

:thumb: :thumb:

Here is for when Ash goes to bed he can take his hat off.

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9558/tablehathu5.png[/img]

 

[siarra73]

Post what you think about it, or suggestions if you want...

 

[Oburi]

I dont know how to say this in english, but i'll give it a trail... the edit in the 4 Frame of the first line:
Dont use the black outline and shade a lil shadow with another darker green on the other green.
The other ones are ok i think...

 

[bluebird]

:thumb:Nice

 

[JD_Slasha]

A few things.

1) Don't double post, You posted a second post not even an hour after your first. It takes time for people to actually see the thread and reply. Double posting is just a waste of forum space and uneeded. A good rule of thumb is to post when someone has replied. If no one has replied, wait 72 hours before bumping.

2) There are a few problems with the bed set I can see. One, on the sideviews of the characterset, the way Ash's arm is positioned is really awkward and doesn't look right. On the top fourth frame, you've made the bed empty with the blankets folded inwards to give the appearance of someone who got out of bed. The blue you have under the bed looks completely out of place. In fact. shouldn't the sheet be right under? You'd be expecting to see white not blue. If you're gonna' stick with blue, then atleast shade it.

3)Lastly, the bottom frames don't work because of his hat. Realistically, if he was wearing his hat to bed, and he layed on his stomach, his hat would probably be tilted to the side so the bill doesn't get in the way.

Just some things to think about. You might wanna' read up on forum rules when you get the time

 

[siarra73]

I Updated it a bit. Any more suggestions? I tried to fix everything that was pointed out...

 

[siarra73]

Sorry to post again a day after my last but I now added a table so ash can put his hat on it when he goes to bed.

 

[boon]

The pixels on the bed are 2x2 whereas the pixels on ash are 1x1.

Then, when the cover comes up theres more inconsistency. I'd fix that, If I were you.