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Please Review My Blog

Could you please review my blog and well, leave a comment or feedback about it.
Please don't be so harsh in your comments and feedbacks :lol:
BTW please rate it from 1 to 5 thx

Here's My Blog

http://fhelzone.blogspot.com

Thanks a lot in advance
 
your glossy images a the top (header of each column) need something inside them. right not they're just big blank images with no purpose

the title "fhelzone" doesn't tell me anything about the blog. what's it about -- what's the theme -- why should i read it? maybe have a subtitle "a blog about cars" or something

your layout looks like it cuts off at the bottom.
 
Considering the content - are you selling out, or are you just voluntarily fellating a new product every day?

Also the google ads are a bit excessive, make them smaller or in between every 2 or something.

It really just looks like a giant advertisement. =\
 

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It's an icky generic shiny plastic "Web 2.0" theme anyway. I don't think your organization is too bad but I really don't like that nasty generic look. It seems like the title should belong inside the black bar above the content.

I think it's already been said but there doesn't seem to be much of a central theme either, and you don't provide much in the way of commentary on the items you link. You're sort of just pimping random stuff. If you want to pimp things you like it's fine, but you should provide some kind of commentary that brings personality and character to the blog. What you have right now amounts to search results for "stuff I think is cool". People don't want to read a link list of neat junk, they want meaningful content that provides context and perspective.
 

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