Platoon Dogz Protagonist Spriting Improvement Thread

[Tachiba]

Hey there everyone, it's TaFresh. Right now, I'm hard at work for my current project Rancid:Ominous Alchemy, but I decided to start making concept characters for my next planned game, Platoon Dogz.
This thread will be updated regularly, but right now this is the WIP sprite of the game's silent protagonist, nicknamed Asaji.



Any comments are welcomed, especially art experts. I decided to try out a new way of spriting, since I couldn't sprite much anyway.

And...

the more you learn? Was that the saying?

Whateer, bottom line is, tell me how I'm doing!

Thanks!

Fresh.

 

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the tshir botom is too square should be more rounded basically if you want a good advice look yourself in a mirror with a tshirt on how the tshirt flow

also you seem to lack a lot of shading in the black area maybe a wool-ish texture for the hat