Overgrown Subway concept

[badmonur]

I 3d modeled the subway walls and stairs then rendered it so i dont have to bother with the photoshop perspective tool (it sucks) and threw it into photoshop for painting. C&C is welcomed and encouraged.

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[Desecration]

Holy shit! That looks fantastic, very nice job. I love the style of the colored image, the floor in particular is very nice. You've also managed to capture the light in a nice way which adds to the effect. What tools did you use other than Photoshop for this, Maya?

 

[badmonur]

im a cinema 4d user. Mostly for the quick interface and fast rendering times
thx for the comments

 

[Mascarpone]

something wrong with the ambiance. considering how overcast and brown the sky through the hole is the light inside shouldn't be so white. also the areas outside the halo seem too well lit aswell.

in the words of all the old-school-diablo-we-hate-diablo-3's-new-color-pallete-doofuses

"Needs more browns and blacks"

it just feels to bright for a dilapidated old place.

 

[Zakkeh]

Wow, Thats Naice :biggrin:

But as mascar said, Brownish skys and nice green grass, darken it up and maybe make the grass not so alive, but not quite dead, half and half, Green + Brown = Grown or Breen, Whichever. But grown is what grass has done in the past..

 

[Mascarpone]

no the grass itself is fine it's the lighting.

 

[arev]

Really nice overpainting, I like the image a lot. Two things you might consider: damaging those stairs a bit - they look too new compared to that crack in the ceiling; also the sky could be brighter.
Nice job anyway

p.s. Oh yeah, and the lighting looks like there is an omni directional light just below the crack.

 

[Glitchfinder]

A couple of comments. First off, the light is in the wrong position. There should be a little more of it on the top. Otherwise part of the hole is somehow blocking the light with its vast emptiness. (Specifically, the indentation closest to the viewer. Based on the angle of the lighting elsewhere, there should be some visible light from that too.) Next, why isn't there debris on the floow from where the cieling caved in? No matter how hard it rained, if the rest of the building is still in that kind of condition, the debris would still be there. Also, the comment regarding the stairs has relevance. They look fairly new, as if some construction worker came by and put in a new set but left the rest of it as-is. Finally, where are the bars next to the starts. Pretty much every building code worldwide requires that, and last I checked, those weren't very likely to disappear without a trace and leave the rest of the building as is. (Kinda like the rubble from the collapse, huh?) I can see where they were supposed to have been, but regulations would have also required them in the middle of that staircase, where there would certainly be holes in the ground if they had been removed.

Also, please take these comments with a grain of salt. I'm a perfectionist, which is why I don't try my hand at art. I'm too nitpicky to go through the learning process. In reality, this is much better than I can really hope to accomplish without a great deal of hard work and determination. (And a great deal of cursing at myself, because I just can't really translate what I see to the finised product.

 

[bacon]

Its pretty neato, it reminds me of Xenosaga.