Opening Title WIP

[moog]

hello i am moogle sprite.

Im posting this piece of shit opening theme here so you guys and gals can give me some feeback. At the moment its a WIP; im not sure rather to add more instruments or change certain articulations or whatever. This is for an OST I am working on in a Rm2k3 Rpg.

so yeah, good bad ugly, hit me with it.

I wrote this in Finale 2k8 with GPO vst plugin. It took me around 4 hours to physically write and an hour to put into the pc, so um yeah.

thanks in advance yall :3

http://www.zshare.net/audio/12576692bbdfe3ec/

 

[Mascarpone]

reminds me of quest 64

 

[moog]

reminds me of quest 64

uhhh....I dont know if I should say thank you or fuck you?

(ie could you be a little more in depth :3)

 

[ultimaodin]

Yeah it's pretty good if your going for one of those go lucky happy storylines to your game!

I'm more a fan of more suspensful and dark music, but then again I'm making cult games so I guess it depends.

My only real comment I can make is that the last sudden speed up part seems a tad random.

Also it's not loopable but it's for an introduction so I will forgive you on that! :thumb:

 

[mega_man_aXe]

Are there time changes in there or is it just me?  I like it, especially the middle part with the bells.

 

[moog]

Yeah it's pretty good if your going for one of those go lucky happy storylines to your game!

I'm more a fan of more suspensful and dark music, but then again I'm making cult games so I guess it depends.

My only real comment I can make is that the last sudden speed up part seems a tad random.

Also it's not loopable but it's for an introduction so I will forgive you on that! :thumb:

Thanks for the feedback!
Its for an adventure-rpg, something like Grandia or a Tales game. I was going to make it longer, so the ending is kind of shit. But yeah, I want to make it loopable by the time its done.

Are there time changes in there or is it just me?  I like it, especially the middle part with the bells.

Heh, it sounds that way cause of all the fermatas I threw in it to slow it down, but yeah there are a couple time changes. Good ear.

 

[Kishi3133]

reminds me of quest 64

uhhh....I dont know if I should say thank you or fuck you?

(ie could you be a little more in depth :3)

I wonder how much vulgar words you said before maybe err lemme see, 99 words? I guess so.

Venetia: Watch the spam, ok? By the way, cursing is allowed in this forum.

 

[Jamlpr]

@Moogle Sprite:
Man it sounds pretty damn good to me.

@Kishi3133:
Why would you spam like that?
I say you take a few grammar lessons =].

 

[moog]

@Jamlpr: Thanks man! Much appreciated ^_^

@kishi: I dont even understand if that was an insult or what. Try not to reply like a 4th grader with Down's Syndrome, thanks!

 

[zeldrak]

Looks nice, I like the beginning and the near-end parts. :D

 

[moog]

Thanks! Im actually going to edit it this weekend with my new VST *break dances in happiness*