OC from my manga.........

[Despain]

hello! i am making a manga with my gf. shes the writer and i am going the art (in other words im the mangaka :crazy: lol.)

the story is about a 10000 year old demon named wanderer kitsune who is awoken in 1800s japan during a time of war. he is cursed to live a thousand lifetimes. over the course of his travels he meets a girl named hakari who is a girl in school and she befriends him and may soften his heart....

anyway this is the main character WANDERER KITSUNE (i think hes sugoi~~)

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pls reply!!!  :thumb: :thumb:

 

[eternal_magus]

Hey man good job, good job, it looks pretty cool so far your character design is interesting but reminds me a little bit of Inuyasha...I know it's your girlfriend doing the writing part but you should provide a little bit more info on the story so we can really see what this character's like. Also I think you need to work on his hands a little more they look kinda weird. The band-aid on his face is a nice touch, really adds a sense of realism to your work. Hope to see more from you in the future.

 

[Mascarpone]

*raises hand* I get it.

 

[Luminier]

IMO you should flatten his chest a little. right now it looks a little bit like he has b**bs. ^^;

also i think his face is too......... nice? yes he does not look much like he would hold a sword let alone use it ^^ i suggest giving hiom meaner eyes. also he would look even FOXIER(hehe sry bad pun xD) if yuo gave him a tooth stickign out form under his lip ^^

other than that he is perfect! gj! d(^^b

 

[Grathea]

No no ignore luminier-san, you need to make him EVEN BISHIER.

Less than sign three bishies.

 

[Venetia]

add eyelash's

 

[JD_Slasha]

Hay do you liek Inuyahsa>?

 

[moog]

Hey man good job, good job, it looks pretty cool so far your character design is interesting but reminds me a little bit of Inuyasha...I know it's your girlfriend doing the writing part but you should provide a little bit more info on the story so we can really see what this character's like. Also I think you need to work on his hands a little more they look kinda weird. The band-aid on his face is a nice touch, really adds a sense of realism to your work. Hope to see more from you in the future.

lol

 

[Kav]

i can't wait to see more of your work.

 

[Samhatake]

It looks Nice.  and Simple.
Is it suppose to be some type of Furry Samurai?
But the feet kinda, look more something turtles feet.
Probably make his feet has sharp nails within the fur of the feet

 

[Venetia]

Probably make his feet has sharp nails within the fur of the feet

 

[Kav]

missingno u have inspired me to make my own manga.. i will post as soon as i can

 

[2BMCreationz]

Not a bad start. Keep developing and you will be with one of the bestestsis :thumb:

 

[Shadow_Strike]

His raised arm doesn't connect with his body. It looks disjointed and painful to be honest. If you just brought the arm closer and studied the muscle of the shoulders a little more it'd look a lot better.

But yeah, keep drawing dude.

 

[dadevvtsvre]

oh graet drawing! i wanna see it coloured!! your mange sounds cool and i hope u finish it!!  :lol: the drawin looks cool dude cept the eyes are a little high, mangas are supposed 2 have big hair remember????????

 

[stillzero]

Why all the approving comments?

Oh...

I get it...

 

[mawk]

whats there to get? this looks like it has fantastic potential and i cant wait to see the full manga

hes so kawaiiiiiiiiiiiii

you should add a woman and lots of innuendo too it's what the professionals do!!

 

[Venetia]

no they should only blush and mebbe kiss at the end!!! LOL ^w^

 

[Grathea]

no no no he should have a boyfriend! I love yaoi, i'ts great!
Senpai!!!

 

[Kav]

no no no he should have a boyfriend! I love yaoi, i'ts great!
Senpai!!!

i'll make yaoi fanfics based on missingno's manga