NO ID's HOUSE OF DOPE RHYMES AND FUNKY BEATS

[No ID]

NO ID's HOUSE OF DOPE RHYMES AND FUNKY BEATS
OK now I know this is probably isn't the place and most of you are likely uninterested, but I figured, since I like you guys I'd post it anyway.

Thing is, I used to make all of these Demo tracks because I really wanted to be a song writer/ghost writer, since I didn't really enjoy rapping which is why I don't do it anymore. I also recorded a bunch of R&B demos which I love, but I don't have the masters so I wont be able to post them, and even if I did I wouldn't post them because I can't sing for shit and this would be a lol @ No ID thread. (not that it already isn't)

Most of the tracks I'll post were done in '07/'08. I don't wanna flood this thread with a bunch of old boring "rap" songs if you guys don't want me to. Especially since they would take up my usershare storage space.

Here are some Links.
White Girls Ain't Nothin' But Trouble
My Own Worst Enemy

That first song I actually did being funny for this girl at my job who wanted to date me. I told her White Girls Ain't Nothin' But Trouble. lol Then we Explicit.

The second song I wrote for this lame ass rapper dude. He didn't like it said it was too conscious for his style. He probably was right but he sucked, so he should of took we he could get you know?

Let me know what you think, I know I don't have a flow so that would be pointless to say. I'm talking lyrics and production wise. Instrumentals were also done by me using "Reasons" Propellerhead Software.

 

[Toams]

hey this is actually pretty cool
you have a steady beat going, and the rapping's nice to listen to
i've only listened to the first song, but i'll listen to the second song at some point

anyway, you could work on your kicks a bit more
it seems like its just a vague bass tone sometimes, when you need a somewhat sharper sound to get a good distinct rythm
i was listening to old tracks by eminem some time last week, and he had a really distinct drumline
so if you want to get a grasp of what im talking about, check it out

also you might profit from a second instrument like a flute or something, or some violins, that do random riffs in the background
that'd be awesome

 

[No ID]

oh yea that first song was my version of a song from the fresh prince called "Girls aint nothin but trouble" you know the I dream of Jeannie sample, I just changed the tone a little bit.

The second is a sample from the movie "Bourne Supremacy".

Thanks for the advice.