NEW: Stolen Liberty: Battle Quest

[zeroartist]

Okay, this is my first project thread so please, go easy on me!

Stolen Liberty: Battle Quest
(or Terra's Revenge, haven't decided yet)
by zeroartist/Zero Artwork (I want to join a group or need some people to help in my group - Gravity Games, will put up a thread in recruitment soon)[/b]

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Freedom will never be given to the people, you all live under my darkness.

Story Synopsys:
A world torn up by tears and turmoil from a dark past. History lives on in a world destroyed by war and elemental chaos. One boy has the ability to change all that for the better... or for the worse...

Characters:
-Terida Blakdawn-
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A boy who was brought up in a special orphan home. He appears a little quiet to others sometimes but all in all he is quite likeable by others. His parents were murdered when he was little by a strange being which he tends to find out why.

I have created more characters but need facesets and haven't completed their roles in the game yet. You will have to check out the website for the rest of them HERE. I will add them here as soon as I can.

Screenshots:
Screenshots page.
These are just the screenshots of the game in the making when I first started creating it. I have made the maps much much better and smaller, just give me a little while so I can get better screenshots onto the site.

at the moment my PC is not working so I can't credit everyone as I don't have info on what I have used, I know ccoa has helped me (a lot, I thankyou so much) & sephirophspawn I have used one or two of his scripts.

Anyway, please feel free to check out my webpage of the game here:
Stolen Liberty: Battle Quest page.
Here you will get a better explaination of Stolen Liberty: Battle Quest

and my further projects are here:
Stolen Liberty Online

please tell me what you think of my project, I'm not that good at showcasing but I'm doing demos when I have created more of the game.

thanx 4clicking on the Stolen Liberty thread.

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[Jstreet]

You have multiple bb code errors. I looked at the website, wasn't anything impressive. Your mapping could use improvement. I'm not necessarily bashing your game. If you finish it you prove much better than 90% of this community.

I do like the fact that you haven't set outrageous expectations for yourself. Anyway good luck. I'll play when you have a demo on hand.

 

[zeroartist]

You have multiple bb code errors. I looked at the website, wasn't anything impressive. Your mapping could use improvement. I'm not necessarily bashing your game. If you finish it you prove much better than 90% of this community.

I do like the fact that you haven't set outrageous expectations for yourself. Anyway good luck. I'll play when you have a demo on hand.

I am new to programming games after all, maybe you could give me some tips on mapping etc etc ':| c'mon u could've given me at least one good thing about my game, I think the storyline is unique, when I have completed it I will show you what I mean. And the images/screenshots for my game was when I first created it last year, I haven't been able to put up brand new screenshots yet because my PC's crashed but I've made the maps much better as I went over them and redone them (also made them smaller). The only one which still looks like what it is is the prison screenshot (the 1st one). All the rest I have changed about.

What can I do to make my webbie and game better then? I haven't got enough money and online time to make a proper .com one but what could I do to this to make it better? Please reply cos this would help me out a lot with my game.

Thanks for replying anyway.

p.s. absolutely love your 9MM games, if you need any help at all with artwork or anything then please let me know.